A wuxia novel for my fellow readers. To try out my skills after many years on this trope, I am doing so with passion. I shall update frequently, the goal is daily, but could change based on other work and popularity. Feel free to reach out for feedback and/or suggestions. Enjoy :)
The story just piques your interest from the first few chapters and has been consistently doing so till the latest chapter. I wrote this review after finishing the current volume 1.I give the writing quality a 5/5, the dialogues down to the narration is good, it didn't ruin my immersion.5/5 for the story development, the build was good and the pacing isn't rushed or dragged I love it.As for the Character Design I give it another 5/5. Each character has their own personalities and the MC is good, unique, which further enhances the immersion.5/5 for Updating stability, it seems like the author constantly updates, so all good.As for the world background I also give it a 5/5. The setting happened somewhere in Korea, and things were already happening behind the scenes, we'll probably learn more about it in volume 2.Overall I enjoyed it, may this review catch your attention and convince you to read the book.
It's different from the novels I'm used to, i love it. Keep up author ?
back to writing dog took u long enough hopefully this one is better than ur old stuff
I loved it And thought the author did a great job thE story line was Amazing
The story has an interesting premise, but the way the mc is acts is nothing short of a letdown . He doesn't want to survive with the way he acts and talks . The only reason he'll survive in the future chapters is that i speculate , is through sheer plot armors.
I've found another potential diamond !! . my luck is insanely good these days. pacing is good. mc is slowly getting stronger and has likeable personality. World building is decent.. though power system is not explained till now ,hope author does it in future . I like the info-dump in this novel where it is slow and gradual unlike when authors simple put 3 pages worth info at the very beginning ( which I'll definitely skip lmao?). nice start .. hope author keeps it up and doesn't bottle potential banger
The story so far is engaging and filled with detail. The characters are well written and most if them are very lovely, I'm especially a fan of the maid! I look forward to more chapters!
A rebirth story and space and family sacrifices and being a female oriented strong young girl
Judging by its synopsis and his ability this could be a potential banger
I actually found this novel days ago, but I am only writing this now because I've read many chapters already. First of all, wow, the world building is impressive. There's actually a clear direction and background that can acts as a blueprint of the story for it to delve deeper and add more details of what could be happening. It is also incredibly easy to read, like honestly, it is. It's not too wordy and pleasing to the eyes while using fitting words and still remaining a little poetic. Every description fits the mood perfectly. The concept alone? Wow. Author knows what she's writing!
Started reading this one, very much invested in the story. Ren gets his clan destroyed along with himself and given another chance to thrive amongst the living, but as a child again. The pacing is perfect and doesn't go ahead of itself. The story is allowing itself to grow while giving us a more battle ready system to gawk at. I feel like this piece is promising and will be to engage in reading more of Demon Spirit System.