Spoiler Alert.Author,The rest of the chapter is good.But After that chapter when Betty kissed Andrea,it gave a bad taste to me(Light NTR).Even though it aint being done with a Man. I Hope that kind of thing aint happening anymore in the upcoming chapter.
Very very nice to read.+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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WOW... It's recommended!At first, when I saw the cover, I think this is the story about an old grandpa... and soon after I read the synopsis, it hooked me... even more, after I read some chapters, it got my heart... will put it into my collection for sure... I will be waiting for more chapters...best of luck author..
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NOT WORTH TO READ. THIZ WILL JUST MAKE YOUR MOOD SO BAD THAT MAKES YOU PUNCH THE AUTHOR! FUCKING 5 YEARS TIMESKIP BUT HE ONLY FUCKING GAIN A 5 LEVELS? SERIOUSLY!! THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I READ THIS KIND OF TRASHY TIMESKIP. DONT BOTHER READING THIS GUYS THIS IS JUST A PURE CANCER NOVEL
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it started good but it became embarrassingly bad
I am usually a silent reader and I don't really post a comment but yayy this is amazing. ? So glad I found this story!! The plot is so interesting please don't stop updating ??
Zwei turns out to be a great magician and a warrior,, he is mastering his skills really well,, i also like the way he is so protective of his student,,
this novel has great potential.........if it is not selected then I don't know what would.......................................................
I love this kind of monster trainer romance and from the beginning this romance has remained good, I just think these newer posts have left something to be desired with other people's tournaments and duels, have been too many chapters and it seems like the MC became a bystander.It also seems that the author has forgotten the other 5 koi from MC, which I really hope to see them evolve.In addition, a slight development of the story is lacking as: because Wang Tao trusts Ye Qin so much that he had nothing special about two boys being bullied; even though I was short I wanted an explanation of why Tang Yaling knew it would lose to MC; and lastly, beware of the creation of new powers, such as those rings, which were very sudden and without explanation and development at all.By the way, I'm sorry for my writing, because I'm from Brazil and used Google Translate.