I liked the chapter its really good when he makes jokes its really funny and kinda futuristic i really like but i dont know why the 4rt chapter hasent came out yet
this is a like hidden gem which not many people know about like the story is great the grammer is good and the updates are stable and even the worldbuilding is a breath of fresh air compared to run of the mill system novels
I just read the first chapter and it already made me laugh ? The story is in the MC POV and that's new for me, since every cultivation story usually used third POV. Goodluck! After 23rd Nov, maybe I could give you two stones ?
To be honest i don't find it interesting why not stay at the first idea of having 2 siblings get powers and make them each with unique powers having friends and family make stories interesting i don't see what people find good about killing everyone to make the mc gain powers ... it sucks that there is no real thoughts put in most of the stories no wonder they all get abandoned in the end
the starting is very good. i lik travis is so stubborn and the best part was when he got scared . Loved the way you described the forzen lake and everything after that. i love the patience in your writing.
This review may change in the future, who knows. I'm only 15 chapters in.I'm not gonna lie: the story is good and interesting. I love a good Reincarnation story. The characters are mildly interesting. At least I'm not seeing the cliche of every single character hating the MC for no good reason. There are a few grammar hiccups, but the writing style is good.Now, the author doesn't seem to have a firm grip on updating. I suspect we'll be getting either 2 to 3 chapters a week, which is okay.The pacing is a bit off. Some moments are rushed and others take too long. Luckily, there are not many of those scenes in the book.As I said before, the characters are mildly interesting and they don't all seem to hate the MC. What hate he does get is entirely his own fault because he's a snarky twit.The MC lived a bad life before, but the author doesn't try to shove this down our throats. They give us a bit of information, namely when the MC us moaning about the bad choices he made. I hope I see some growth in the future.I think I'll write another one as the story progresses, to see if it gets better.
The concept of the story is good...I like the world-building and feature description of the game.....the characters are intriguing and I'm curious how they developed their abilities....keep it up.
FINALLY SOMEONE WHO GETS IT. having a harem is bad ,back when i first started reading on webnovel I used to think that harems are okay but webnovel made me realize that harems are bad the hard way now i hate harems.......
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1 this might just be me being nit picky , but whatever the main character is using is not nen.Nen has restrictions on the user that allows the ability to be more powerful, take for example kuropika; can only use certain chains on the spiders or else he will die. By allowing the mc 100% talent at all types of nen you have practically ignored a key opportunity to define the mc. Because to me as of 10 chapters in the mc has no defining characteristics ,a jack of all trades does not always =god like, in this case it's just means there exist a character who can do what ever he wants withought the needs for justification.If you have read or seen HxH nen qualities is built off a characters personality(which cheredoe lacks) , and I concede to fact that this a hack system novel, however it still has to be logical. 2 This novel feels seriously jumpy, the mc just happens to meet several main characters if atg for seemly no reason withought hardly no space between each chapter. 3 I apologize to the author if this is found offensive, however I simply trying to give a honest and hopefully insightful review that might be of some use.
Mad lad created 4 new bloody leveling to get the editor he wants. He will not stand down and accept his circumstances like a certain protagonistist from a certain novel *wink wink*