I really liked it, it's just a shame that it's free only up to chapter 17. I don't feel like it's enough chapters to see if I really like something, it also feels greedy. I also didn't like that the time period was properly introduced in the beginning. Going by the picture I thought this was ancient times, till they brought up a QR code.
A fantastic book written by a fantastic person. Tha author has written every chapter pretty wellI like this book very muchLove this book.May the stars align for the author
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You know how it goes. The author reviews his own novel to add more info to the novel for those who come across this novel and want to look at the reviews first. I don't have anything to say other than to just read it. Trust me, you'll like it.
Not a bad novel in the slightest. The characters immediately get their distinct personalities which makes the dialogue a whole lot better than average. The story is still starting to pick up but I have good faith in it. I expect good things for the author and really hope he delivers! Good luck in the competition my rival!
Ahh it's the generic cool hero mc novel. He trusts everyone easily, like what if someone betrays you ? He is like " ya whatever " but goes on saving strangers that he hasn't even met. I hate these kind of mc's, not my type of novel.If you like retarded mc who always tries to act cool but ends up being a dumb hero this is for you.
Nice one.This book has a beautiful world background and is filled with thrilling chapters, judging from the few I've read.However, a little bit of editing needs to be done to give the book a good writing quality.
The MC is powerful so why is he not showing it off to his relatives even when is underestimated all the time .................................................
don't waste your time hear.... paywall from chap 40....and that for a novel with total racism .... psyco mc for whom r*pe is regular thing and he himself is one....advance tech but stealing car is as easy as opening door locks.
I haven't read the book but the reviews are chaotic. Im sorry author. i can see that you cared for the book and feel hurt when someone insults your creation, I feel you. Dumb readers everywhere. Same with the authors. I honestly like that you reply to people. It shows that you keep up to date on everyone's comments. It's okay to reply back, don't ignore them but its better to be more careful and professional with words. Hope you have a comeback and return with a better book (cuz based from the reviews, they do not like it) Good Luck to you author. It's hard being an author right? They don't see ththe endurance, effort and creativity of the mind to formulate plots, make up characters and create the word.Again, Good Luck. P. S. I decided to read a few chapters of this book to see what's the fuss all about but only a few chapters cuz I can't stand being in a novel full of toxic comments. Not your fault. Also The 5 stars are for the next novel you create, hope it turns out good. Would love to read a book from an author with your kind of principles.
The grammar does need a little bit of editing. But that's just a technical part of being a writer. The story matters more. For a webnovel, the idea is different and somewhat unique. Video game lovers would definitely have a blast, reading this as they embark on a fantasy adventure with the characters. It's 8 chapters in so I cannot comment on the story development yet. Please do update more :)
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