I have a feeling this your novel is gonna be successful. But there are something's I pinpointed when reading, the tenses you used are kind of confusing, that's all. I hope you correct them for the future.Well nothing much to say but: Welcome to the World of Authors!??
It was finally published. The story was very entertaining I noticed the influence of Fey Evolution Merchant in regards to the grade,ability, and use of runes to evolve the beasts. I hope this will picked. I really love the story.
You have a very solid base, that can make your story progress from where it is now. Word choices, structure, delivery and writing quality is good. Keep it up!
I had come to this novel after reading through the author's other novels. But I'm absolutely in love after the first few chapters. The story building till now is very steady and there's suspense and climax that's keeping readers on the edge. It's a ghost exorcism, revenge and of course romance with the cliffhanger to urge your forward to read the chapters. Looking forward to reading more of this book.
Hi everyone, obligatory author review here. I've been playing around with this concept for quite a while and wanted to create something that I would have fun reading myself. My goal is for a clean and fast paced novel with an abundant amount of cliff hangers. Hope you guys enjoy!
if you are fine with the cliche generic novel this is for youthis is not my cup of teathe mc is an idiot i wonder how become a doctorit needs a lot of brain power, so many complicated things to learn so even if he was not smart he should still be able to think normallyyet he did not even understand his family or clan before taking actionsooohhh i need to be a heart something somethingoooooohhhh someone tried to kill me but i still continue buying herbs not even asking help from his super powerful grandpa which other “feared”(yet they still dare to kill his grandson)others might think it is good but for me its so so
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The novel is very good and needs more readers, the grammar is also very good, I recommend many people to read it ? ? ?.....................
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Loving the story so far. Can’t wait for him to go into the outside world and show his master how it has changed since his time. Also liked how his cultivation method is like a rubber band ball or a yarn ball can’t wait for him to learn more. Overall a good story if a bit slow right now.
Honestly was looking forward to read this but was turn off by the bad writing. I've only read the first few chapters but I couldn't continue anymore even though I liked the story. It feels like it's lazily translated. Author needs to work on his writing.