Yo this is some gourmett level novel right here the only thing is i hope you make this super long take your time with the world building dont rush things and the harem should be slowly introduced and organically meshed well all the best
Loving this novel, there are sometimes grammatical errors, but the author checks the comments often and fixes them, as I can speak from experience as I often help correct said errors. This novel is a great read!!! KEEP IT UP AUTHOR
I'm going just give this a 5 star because of the large number of people rating it low just because of the synopsis. It doesn't necessarily mean it's bad, I've read something that seems like the standard Chinese novel yet completely surpassed my low expectations.
Even if you think it's bad, don't review without reading.
one thing for sure, the translator sucks.
I'd rather translator use the concept of Xian directly. What on earth is the fu**ing "Cultivator" is? if you don't treat this novel seriously, plz! plz do not translate it! ! !
I can't believe it.
ShanChuan needs a good translator. This novel needs a translator who is willing to dedicate part of his/her effort, and this novel worth it.
I've read books on webnovel and Qidian for decades, this book is one of the very few that is really successful. Writer has prepared a lot for this book. This book should not be blamed due to the ridiculous translation
This story have a great development. It is good system story. So give it 5 star. Now for post the review I will write something that doesn't have any thing do with wed novel. ?.........................................12345566788899000988876655432111467901234667888999990009865335790631260122334556789001124501l~~~~~~~~~\\\\\\\\|.
It is currently the tenth chapter. The story has been good so far, but the start was a little confusing, atleast for me. I think that this will turn out to be a good novel in this genre. The fact that this is in my opinion a promising novel is simply because of the family dynamic, most novels don't have this kind of family thing going on for them, at most the mc will be dating someone and that is in my opinion really boring.
in short: A really promising novel, that has a great family dynamic.
And author pls update the novel!!!!!
Thanks for the original and the one who started the translation of this great novel. If you want to know that this novel is good ..... well go read the review in novelupdate and decide by yourself.
BTW why this novel posted in qidian ? as far as I know this novel should be the right of wuxiaworld, right ? sorry for my ignorance because I do not see any statement from Ren (Wuxiaworld)
I like you author but you need to learn that having a 50ch of drivel and useless mc is not ok
Before around ch 48 the story was absolute trash and just skimming is good enough cause nothing of value is there at all, the only thing you could get from that is that mc is a ***** and fucking stupid yet he can endure alot
That's it....
I like the story and the characters. Seems to have constant updates and I like the direction. There are some minor grammatical errors but it doesn't bother me. I hope this review will inspire you to keep writing. Please don't drop.
five stars. this novel basically does everything right and the writing and grammar are also really good
i just hope it won't be like other novels where they take a break and never return
all in all i would recommend this novel, just read the first few chaps and you'll be hooked trust me
There are two things that will make a person such as this Kaiser to instantly like a story. 1: Fancy cover, 2: comedy genre.
Why wait for the japanese to release new romcoms when you have 100+ comedy CN waiting for you. Yes you. Just click the like button!
I'm going to be a little dishonest here and myself a complete 5 star. Well... I'm primarily writing this review to thank all those who are already reading my novel or plan to read it. The novel will probably be divided in two or possibly three parts. The first part of the novel will go from the Volume 1 to possible Volume 7 or 8; this part is going to follow the story of the game, with some changes and a lot of spicy conflicts. The second part is still being planned, but it is going to be a continuation of the first part.
As for release schedule, well... I try to make it once a day. I don't have stockpile of chapter, I publish the chapters as I write them on the same moment.