Salvatore_77119p
I hope you enjoy
What to expect?
- Power system that changes as the story progresses
- Long conversations between chars
- Only a little Romance
- Sometimes you'd see the same event from a different Point of View
And a lot more, Read and judge it yourself!
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Once again, I hope you enjoy.
Will the romance/harem be anything like your other novel?
I just love Culitivation story’ s that the mc is op
The book is interesting to read. It seemed to be different concept than other books I read. Let's see how it will be in future
This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Give it a try; as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I will improve as I keep on writing
PS. Positive Suggestions are always open and welcome.
Don’t waste your time reading this. It starts off really good and then just plummets… It ends so fast that you know it ended but you are still so confused.
My large saber is again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again unable to endure the thirst!
unfortunately the botched attempt at comedy (which is the main focus of the first 7 chapters that I read) makes it unreadable for me, and I would guess that anyone above the age of 12 would likely share that opinion. Save yourself some time and avoid it.
The manhwa was brilliant, frickin amazing. And I didn't expect to run into this in here, while scrolling through. Great read, highly recommend it!
Excellent!! I must say i was so into the story that i hit the end and got depressed!! Wow cant wait for future updates!! Love the MC he is so shamelessly funny i was laughing so hard at a few chapters i started to choke!! Serious asthma attack!! Luckily i was able to live through it and keep reading because the story just keeps getting better!
In general, I like this work so far, but rather because there is nothing else to read from a similar genre. Good read already. However, the only thing that annoys me in this work, so much so that I decided to leave a review, is the constant limitation of the main "hero" in system points. In other words, nerf. The rest is readable. :)
Good novel!
Sure, it might be another MC rise-to-power, but hey, at least it's funny, and hey, at least it avoids some of the usual cliches in these type of stories. One of the actual martial arts training stories I can actually stand to read.
Characters have depth, MC's clever scheming is fun to follow along, romance leads aren't obnoxious, you get a pass in my book.
