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I love it author. Great work keep it up
Love is messy. True friends stand by you. That's what I got from this story.
if this novel was put through some serious editing it would be great it's great story concept but in English anyway it just doesn't flow properly.
The story is getting more interesting with every part and seems real and i always appreciate the choice of words and the language so keep it up and am waiting for the next part
World building is so good. Although there are some cliche parts it's still okay for me. Mc isn't winp. Worth reading
I didn't expect this when I decided to read this novel but I loved it. The characters are well described and we can clearly see their emotions through their actions. At least I can.I look forward to it author!
Honest review (Ignore the rating)Also, pin this author.Alright, where should I start?The writing quality is fine. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's readable. Updates are perfect and sometimes go on a hiatus but that's fine since all authors do that. The story pace is perfect, though it leans on the accelerated part a bit. The designs of the characters are alright and the world background is gradually explained at a pace you are able to understand.In my opinion, I say this is a great novel. The first few chapters (Probably around 30 chapters) are very meh, but they provide handy information. After that, the story gets better from there.That's pretty much it...Also, the smut chapters are very enjoyable... if you know what I mean...
I just wanna ask if there are any harem and if there are then I don't wanna read it....I hate harem I hate haremI hate harem I hate harem
Too funny I was just about to leave when I was reading the synopsis and I saw hero for the people. Then I scroll down a bit more and author said there would be a lot of violent and it's not for the soft of heart and I have to stay. Hopefully no stupid harem and if there is a harem hopefully it a good one.
the characters in the novel are great and I am interested in the novel and I hope you will post more chapters. It is my pleasure to read this novel and I hope others will join me.
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