The author did mature in his writings! I must say he was already that good ? The story was well elaborated and it didn't confuse me a little bit. I can also sense that the story will get better and better. The author's growth will not stop so we are rest assured ? Just don't stop writing and all readers will be pleased! ?
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I really enjoyed the novel, but after around chapter 60, it seems to have lost any sense of direction. There's no end goal. I have no idea where the novel is going, and not in a good way. It feels very uncomfortable to read a novel where the MC has no goal in mind for so long. I read up to chapter 120 at this point and it felt like a chore most of the time.And keep in mind that these are all long chapters so it feels a lot longer than the average 60 chapters in Webnovel. It's hard to explain the feeling of uncertainty that permeates the story. With no advancement of the story for so long and so much educational material crammed in, I can't continue reading. It's just not enjoyable anymore and I can't keep pretending it's not. Too much to read, not nearly enough progress in the story or characters.Such a disappointment too. It had so much potential
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This novel had a very good start, an eagle clone as a separate body is a very interesting concept. This part is surprisingly well done for such a mediocre novel.But let's start from the beginning.The world is a standard Cultivation world, with a death zone full of treasure only the MCs clone can access. Not much detail about either the world or the Cultivation system. MC is your standard OP genius who was held back by fate, or in this case his soul was to talented for his body. His childhood friend, a beautiful genius, helps him survive until he gains strength.The whole thing has been done before, but there are enough twists to make it interesting.But here the trouble starts, standard enemies popping up everywhere because he is seen as trash and everyone else is so bored they can only pick on him every time he meets someone new. Classic repeat, MC either kills them or shuts them up with his strength. Classic village noop destroying the strong forces backed seniors. Every character is either a villain, a week damsel to be safed, a pin-up senior, a pin-up teacher, a pin-up childhood friend or something else for the MC to ****, kill or turn into a servant. No character besides the MC has a worthwhile backstory, consistent motivation or anything unique.MC has powerful friends(even in higher positions in other sects) , a pretty talented childhood friend, nearly unlimited wealth and every opportunity he needs, but he still goes the standard scumbag rout of trying to get every girl he comes across.In one moment he is a wise, experienced man who can endure hardship, in the next he randomly kills a minor annoyance and in the next he riskes his life to either gain a girl's attention or to gain prestige. He literally risks his life to kill a snake stuck in a mountain to impress a girl he has seen twice. He could have run in the beginning, after saving her or anywhere in between, but no, he has to show that he is dangerous so that anyone in the world can get a shot at him.In between, the auther even forgot that the MC had a clone for like 20 or so days.Beware, starving of small animals.The Harem route and the typical stupid villains destroy this novel.
this book is amazing and I cant wait for the next chapters to come out. Amazing work author you should be proud of yourself and the work you put in
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I hadn’t even realised how far into the book I’d reached until I paused to check the time. Its definietly a great story, I’m going to read till the end. All I have to say is that there’s a lot of information condensed into one chapter. It can be a little overwhelming as a reader, but apart from that I really am enjoying it. Great job ?
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Ok, the novel is slightly interesting. And, yes, it resembles superficially to I have a mansion in the post apocalyptic world, but just inbthe premise of the MC going from and back to gis own world. This ia whole genre, and this novel is more into the development of the MC than the power-harem fantasy. If the novel gets picked for voting I will vote for it... except if it is picked besides Plague Doctor: All my votes are for Plague Doctor.
If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see.And if you don't mines go in my profile and click on the heart icon i'm gladly to do yours too