LightningSnail
Bee so good novel, and bee-love it. When they have a baby i wonder?
Overall a good story, if overly edgy and not particularly well thought out. The setting is about as expansive as you'd expect from a xianxia, which is noteworthy because this was posted almost entirely separate from the genre. It suffers from many of the flaws as well, though, exacerbated since it's shorter than most but tries to cram quite a bit of content into the space.Worth noting that the author has several more chapters posted over on FF . net, but he's also since dropped it in favor of a yet to be posted rewrite, so the story is quite dead.
I'm feeling lazy for this so I will keep it short............................................................This is a amazing,brilliant, great novelYou must read it
This is a great novel. If your expecting anything serious then don't read it though because you won't get what you're looking for. It's one of the funniest things I've read in a while.
A mediocre story that brings nothing unique to the table. Not to mention the main character can hardly be considered a vampire after only seventeen chapters. I won't spoil it but he has been gaining things that make him more human than vampire. The only redeeming quality is that the translation is top notch as per usual. I could see this appealing to people who are young (12-15) or have yet to read novels that do something similar to this story but a dozen times better.
let's give it a shot
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The amazing story of a mischievous teenager dealing with the corrupted world. You may need to change the description to fit the Superstar/CIA/Laws aspect of the novel, it's not really inspiring right nowSo far i'm loving it, Keep going !
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I wished this hadn't entered hiatus or had been dropped, but oh well. Amazing story, overall.
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This book is so much better than the other books you wrote. I don’t think you should let the criticism get to you but use it as a tool to learn and not drop this novel from it like the last novel.
