I really love the concept Herb King and the focus on that instead of sword fighting, face slapping and killing.The introduction is also really good and makes you want to read the novel.What killed the novel less than 15 chapters in is how the main character is written and his interactions with other people.The MC is not written consistently:take for example the intro: the impression of the MC is that herbs and being a doctor is his passion and he actively seeks rebirth due to his regrets in life.Read the first chapter: the impression of the MC is that he reaches the rebirth tree due to plotarmor(i kid you not: it was mentioned multiple times that he managed to reach the tree with the help of some "mysterious strength". The mysterious strength could have easily been replaced by passion, curiosity, willpower, etc and it would have given a better impression of the MC as that strengthens the intro about him). The MC ate the rebirth fruit without further thought and reason aside from that he saw it and felt a bit hungry. The following chapters are also showing the MC in quite bad or unimpressive light.Another issue is the MC's mental age: Either the MC is an old man or a 3 year old ignorant dumb kid. He can't be either. No real human is both and in the novel the MC constantly switches between these depending on what the plot currently needs.Another thing is the character interactions: The interactions between the MC and parents(dialogue, actions) is too short. It's like the reader is getting a glimpse and then the novel moves on. This glimpse is too short to give the reader a real lasting impression about the MC and his parents.
This is terrible. i had to stop after 5 chapters. everyone is very beautiful in this novel.Another thing is one chapter it said thay his parents are working very hard to Help pay the achool fees but the next it says they have been dead for a few years and his sister is paying. its too hard to read
A bit disappointing. The main character was made as dull a stone. Just because he has a bit of power he lorded over normies? He also have no survival instincts. The conflict is a bit on the nose where the MC trips over and making conflicts bigger.
Lets just say, the raws are much more different than this version as it seems like Webnovel decided to mesh up the story while removing details + adding more content or rather filler chapters that weren’t included in the original raws…
Summer 20w0, August 6th.Life is hell. My rations are running low and all I have to accompany me are system novels. Why has this over used trend not died yet? I can feel myself slowly getting weaker with each passing second due to the lack of entertainment. OwO is funny to me now. That's just how starved I am for entertainment. Where I am, there is no light called 'entertainment' because I have starved myself. I am the cause of my suffering. I can see that now, more than ever, in this desperate time. To anyone reading this, I hope you find your light soon. Unfortunately, it might just be too late.
dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !
Курама стал добрым и я не против этого но хирузен здесь страдает слабоумием когда просто допустил кураму тренировать Наруто .....................,....................................,...............,.....................................................................
Ficou muito bom, porém eu acho que ele poderia ter alguma besta divina Recém-nascido para nutri - la e quando a besta ele/ela crescesse pudesse ajudá-los em sua jornada para o pico do mundo ou do cultivo.
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ahhhhhhhhh the reason i'm opening webnovel to sign in daily is this piece of art! i love you so much author for making this gem existed.... stay healthy and make sure chapters are updated always alright?
This novel is acceptable till 100 chapters. After that the charecters become more dumb, foolish and brainless. They cant even see the very obvious things. Those are just one dimensional charects created to cover up the fact that the story is very lacking in the aspects of creativity and good plot. The MC becomes a very lazy idiot - here this author tried to imitate the "monster pet evolution" book but ended up creating a useless low IQ trash MC. If you want to read it because you like the first 80-90 chapter, i suggest you dont but You will be very dissapointed if you keep reading. I am saying it out of personal experience (i read the remaining chapters in raw)
Love it! Wish there was more chapters