AuthorThis is my first time reading this kind of book. The first 5 chapters has me laughing. I see the humor in your words and the world building is good as its progresses. Keep it up and looking foward to reading more from you
I love this novel. The Author did a great job when it comes to story telling. Keep up the good work Author.
This novel is absolutely amazing Please continue writing
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Overall your story is great; it’s written well, and the story is interesting. The only suggestion I have would be to have a chapter where all the sci-fi names/machinery are listed and explained (much like how FCS was explained in chapter 14 iirc). Or make guide us into familiarity by allowing us to grasp each new abbreviation before introducing another term.I love sci-fi, but even this was a little hard for me too follow in the later chapters.The scene with the old man and police officer was rather funny; I would’ve commented, but it kept loading!Anyway, will be following this!
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Good read the script is broken down to finest detail this is a highly recommended.Author please never stop writing.I look forward to finishing this.
The story has a lot of grammatical issues. There was some sentences that could have been worded differently for a better story flow. A few words were misspelled, and transitioning to the next scene is kind of hard to followed. But, every authors is bound to have a lot to a few writing issues. No one is spare! I have never seen an author with a grammar-free story before. With that said, my honest thought is....I'm a big mythology lover! love, love, love it! This story is right up my ally! I like how the author indicated which gods or goddesses is which, and power. But in the long-run it might be harder to remember which god and power they are.The author could make a page, listing them all or remind the reader at the end of each chapters ( this might be a bit much). Another thing is the characters. They were appearing one by one, but for those that were introduce at the beginning beside the gods, it was a bit hard to follow. I would think, for me, is that the pacing was a bit too fast. Especially, the emotional distress that Sol had when he was desperately searching for Anya. A short description about their relationship would be great in supporting his action. I feel like there's more it than just a simple teacher and student relationship. There were a few plot hole that I found to be inconsistent, but the story is still in development , so scratch that. Maybe, there's a plot twist that the author is planning on later. In overall, even thought there are grammatical issues. That could be fix, so there's no need to worry. Beside that the author is doing great! Keep up the good work!
This story is great and for sure deserves to be and eventually will be higher on the ranking (assuming consistent updates). The main reason for this is because until now this story has been written as a web novel and not a regular novel like many of the others have been. This can be seen from the superb world building which while not particularly in-depth (yet) has laid a wonderful foundation for easy expansion either deeper into the dungeon or up onto the surface and has already shown factions and conflict in the human society allowing for hundreds or perhaps thousands of future chapters. This is usually lacking from other stories in the rankings as even those with a pre-established lore need new areas or factions occasionally and without a foundation it always feels like an ass-pull and will eventually limit their longevity. The system the mc has, while cliched, also lends itself to the web novel format as it allows the author to show numerically and or cleanly through a menu that the characters are progressing in each chapter meaning daily updates always feel meaningful and not like fluff. Finally the most impressive thing about this story is the speed at which the character grows, that is to say slowly. Other stories on the rankings almost always show their mc's rocket up in strength to quickly become influential in their world. However I find that this is often short sighted as it hampers world building and longevity as possible enemies quickly become scarce and we never see the prospective of the world as a little guy. This story does not have that problem as the mc is not the strongest and does not seem to be likely to become the strongest any time soon allowing for plenty of interesting hurdles to over come for a long time. Honestly the only real gripe i have is the ridiculous main character who seems to be both comically unperturbed by his situation (literally) as well as far too eager to enter an unknown ant society. This could be easily remedied however if the author either bluntly stated that being an ant has somehow warped his perception of reality or showed that his sanity was rightfully cracking around the edges but that his silly sense of humor was keeping him together, explaining his constant need for jokes.**. ALL PRAISE THE MIGHTY GANDALF!!!!! MAY HIS BEARD BE EVER BUSHY AND WHITE
அவரது உள்ளங்கைகள் ar esweaty முழங்கால்கள் பலவீனமான கைகள் கனமான அம்மாக்கள் ஸ்பாகெட்டி அவரது bervous ஆனால் நான் அவர் அமைதியாக தெரிகிறது மற்றும் குண்டுகளை வீச தயாராக உள்ளது. மொத்த கூட்டம் மிகவும் சத்தமாக செல்கிறது
Welcome readers࿐ྂThis is an author shamelessly giving himself 5 stars rated review hehe, I would like to say to thank you all who have been reading my story so far, and please do show your support with honest.i'll be updating more frequently as well :)