the story is good but really needs some refining lots of errors like the usual he suppose to be she and she suppose to be he then there are multiple names for each person and location so becomes harder to realize whose talking or what area they are in as it simply changes then there's the repeat of words like if i were to say "how are you" filling up the whole paragraph with that one part up to 50-70 times before moving on to the story
No farming (till i quit). Contrived plot. MC's behaviour akin to roid rage.
Basic 3rd rate novel gone premium for random reasons , nothing special , just a MMO , a struggling guy desperate to make some money and lots of plot armor and illogical excuses.
Basically feels like a sequel to legendary mechanic or at least It’s based in the same universeTranslation is good The story seems fun I want more
I don't always write reviews, but I feel like I had to for this novel. Despite all the praise this novel received, I couldn't even read past chapter 20. Here's why.First and foremost, the translation and update stability is top notch. Now to the main problem. The story have way too many plot holes. For example, he came from Earth to another world that is only similar to Earth, yet he assumed that everything is the same, especially herbs and other ingredients. He's a scientist, yet he magically possessed the ability to make realistic drawings of different herbs. Moreover, events just popped out of nowhere to force the plots. A beggar telling you he's good at making drugs, so you just hire him without any testing, make him your chief drug refiner, and give him a 50% share of your business?The MC is a normal scientist, he got pickpocketed. He got helped by someone to catch the thief, then he suddenly invited him into making a business contract because he can smell herb from that guy? Not to mention his follower literally got pulled away against her will to become an immortal out of nowhere. Two paragraphs later, it's as if he's already forgotten about her, and everything is back to normal. Was this so the author doesn't have to bother writing about the interaction with the girl?All in less than half a chapter. Does that even make sense? Then some assassin tried to poison him with the poison from a tree with heavy smell? He, a normal person who just suffered from a fail attempt at opening meridians, was careful enough to smell a cup of water in his room before drinking? Moreover, just as the Lords were talking about how to deal with him, he showed up for absolutely no particular reason. Why? There are no reason at all for him to show his face. The author was too lazy to write something like "the lord invited him
This novel had a good start and even though any trouble is delt with by the system and this novel has no suspense at all, it is written in a way that makes it enjoyable to read.Because the story itself and the characters are very flat the novel focuses on two things. The individual scenes and the reaction of the world around it.The reactions of the world might look nuanced at first, but they are stupidly repetitive at times. Therefore the focus is directed on subtly criticism of the real world school system, education bias and the skewed world fiew of older generations. Simply put, the current school system does not suit the future job marked and living environment. For example, the gaming industry is huge and a great opportunity for those with talent, just like other sports, but we hardly ever see schools support it in the way they support other sports. The individual scenes mostly depend on a summoned character, a famous person from a parallel world. This is were I have to draw a line. The author did not do his research, the people he summons are very famous, but he often has trouble pinpointing the reason for their fame and differentiate it from what they are actually good at.For example: G. R. R. Martin is a famous author, but what made him famous is decidedly not, as stated in this novel, his ability to tell a story from multiple perspectives . Martin is a master of world building and overarching and very compelling story lines. He uses multiple perspectives in his books, mostly because his narrators die often, but it is decidedly not something special to do that and he is not even remotely famous for it. It was genuinely hard for me to think of something Martin is less proficient at, precise and consice descriptions, Martin loves going on long tangents and is kind of infamous for drawing out scenes in his book.I don't particularly like this novel, I really dislike some of the characters summoned and their lack of personality. They mostly feel misrepresented. But I like that the author tries to critique the current educational standards.
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I hate it.
How I wish the story did not come to an end. what a lovely story. The writer has done a good job