Underated story, hope it picks up steam. The only problem I see is to many waifus to early. Maby kill 1 or 2 and then wait alot more to get some extra lovin. I really like it but at the same time can see how people wont like it. Try and make it a bit more realistic and take out a bit of the ***.
Nice concept, nice storyline, nice and flowing grammar. A great and unique system novel, this deserves more than five stars. All I can say now is, update more.
What can I say? Chinanumbawan is written all over this. It's a tad higher than those MTL Novels but still... it's something like a High Mid-tier Tr@sh.
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The protagonist supposedly got tortured for months by a woman and is described as someone who became cold-hearted and ruthless yet not 2 weeks(?) have passed upon his reincarnation, he starts falling for someone else who basically did nothing much but look good. Seriously? Proofread your chapters please. There are also contradicting details or rather, certain details were left out of the story and just skipped with no explanations whatsoever.
Story is ok has sone potiential. Tiny inconsistencies throughout novel, not a big deal but puts a damper on the fun. Overall it would be worth a read if there were more chapters. So far only read 4 so will need to see later when more chapters are released
Waaaaah ooh my oh my, can't wait. This story is really so engaging and I'm beginning to fall in love with each character. The writer is doing such a good job, I love you loads
This book is amazing. I was dubious when I first saw it, but now I'm convinced. It's funny, interesting and an overall great read. In the beginning there are a few grammar issues, but they aren't atrocious, and the book is still legible and funny. I reccomend this book, and hope anyone who reads it enjoys it!
The story is generic and have the stpudist mc.A lot of cliche.No worth your time!!____________________________________________________________________________________
Btw, what is the back story of the main girl 'Cait'.........................................................................................
I mean so far it’s just another urban parallel world where the Mc just copy’s all the famous novels on Webnovel. So it’s kind of dull atm, but who knows maybe he’ll branch out and copy other industries in the future.?
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