The Novel is very Interesting and refreshing.The plot is very nice so far, i especially like the way author is dealing with the character development and his ambitions can be seen by just how large the novel universe has been described including galaxies an all.The MC is quiet a charmer so for and unlike other righteous mc's i prefer a more practical and badass like in a real sense 'bad'ass MC like this one.The author has done a pretty good job so for.cant wait to see how things will turn up!
I am looking forward for this Novel's success.I also feel that this Novel has deep conspiracy hidden inside it.So, to unveil this mystery, we have to read this.Hmmmmm, Lets go read this novel guys. ???
Read it, like it , but just not my cup of tea~ Lemme explain.Even though the writing, world background, etc are good, the idea isn't really sticking with me. But I qould really recommend it!BTW, want a can of cola... :(
This is a really fun novel! I just started reading and, whoah, how come an hour has already passed? :) It's this type of feeling. The author has the best sense for coming up with good story bits. The characters are fun and charismatic, and the situations they get themself in are truly entertaining. There's room for improvement in terms of grammar, but it's really not that important since it doesn't take you out of the story. Great read!
This is an amazing original from this amazing author. He will be going places he is my favorite author. So far all the books I've read from this author are fuchkin pheonomanal. I hope to see more, I will hunt you if you drop any of these masterpieces. I would give money to support you I'm sure other others would too. Maybe think about setting something up.
Hey I really like the story and how the main character goes back in time to redo his chances. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book! ?
No big spoilers since I've only went to chapter 40 but if its that big of a deal don't read this. There is also a TL;DR with no spoilers at the bottom so you don't have to read everything I wrote.Small Summary: MC wants to make a tribe after the tribe he was in was destroyed and with the help of his sister and friends he makes a base for his new tribe to be settled but since there is only 5 people they will need to lure in new people to join. MC is from earth and uses his knowledge to make his little tribe prosper. MC also found this cool super big vine so he makes his tribe close to it and make his tribe the "Vine tribe". This small summary turned out to be bigger than expected...Translation Quality: Its not bad and was always readable. There were a few mistakes regarding his/her a few times but other than that the TQ was very high if I could I would give it 4.7/5 instead of just 4/5.Stability of Updates: I got here when there was already 40 chapters so I don't know much but since I have to pick I might as well pick higher.Story Development: I have no idea why MC wants to make a tribe but dreams don't need to have reasons so I won't say much but I really liked how the actions taken were seemingly reasonable and not over the type like MC somehow knowing how to make electricity for no reason. Nothing of that nature where MC somehow knows everything for every occasion but more like MC can only use the little info he has from earth which already exceeds the Primitive forest.Character Design: I felt like the other characters were ignored when it came to personalities especially the first 3 the brother and sister meet. Although they each have their own little interactions you really don't know much about them except their names, their roles within the tribe and how they always respect MC. The vagabonds they later find also are ignored since they were only given a number and gender. Only one of the 11 actually got a name and in fact we have the most info about him when it comes to his personality. Sister is talked about a lot more but I still don't feel connected to her in any way even though I know so much about her. Its like she's just used as a guide to the new world for MC and a little info broker for her brother sometimes. MC is very caring and loving towards his friends and family and is always working hard but I haven't seen a single flaw from him making it difficult to relate too.World Background: I really like the world background, all the plants and animals with their own special habits and uses is something I find very interesting. I read another novel that went on and on about the smallest detail only to not have any use but in this novel I see that every description is useful or at the very least not useless. The world is a primitive forest with bugs the size of a child and animals meters big. Their a few magic animals and plants that have special abilities that make the novel a lot more interesting since I'm not a fan of pure urban settings and knowing there are special abilities and lifeforms I can look for exciting fights in the future. The forest is called the "Southern Wilderness" or something similar so I think that later on MC will spread to other regions. TL;DR: Good translations and the story is very interesting currently. Characters can a little bit of work but the world setting is very well done. Small aspects of magic and the supernatural for now maybe will increase or degrade but I am currently enjoying it. Small Summary: MC wants to make a tribe after the tribe he was in was destroyed and with the help of his sister and friends he makes a base for his new tribe to be settled but since there is only 5 people they will need to lure in new people to join. MC is from earth and uses his knowledge to make his little tribe prosper and so far has already added 11 people. Every tribe has their own divine protector and MC was very lucky and found a powerful one. Its not said that if its actually a god like its praised as since in his destroyed village the god protector never showed up but at least the one he found is real.
Too many elder brother nowadays i hope this one also be good ??????????????????????????????????????????????????
.......................................................................................................there are some mistakes but the story is nice, please update more.........................................................................................................
Yeah this story turned around quickly. It was a cool start, but with in 5 chapters the author made his MC cheat the system. He literally has over a few billion points from killing himself on the FIRST DAY. Even a god can't kill him and now he has a dungeon that instant creates things. What is the point of reading this novel now when the MC is on par with god.... well until the author decides to increase the power levels? Right now he can magically poof things into existence, he has complete control over new york and his sister has a mythical weapon. There is no point of reading this novel now when the t-ension is removed. I wished you didn't do this and had a weak to strong build up.
I’d love to read this but the first 355 chapters are missing and the “link” provided is either fake or outdated and no longer works.A shame because the description seems really good.
sorry i really dont know how to put my imagination into the story so i end it quickly so in the future i will make a good novel that going to be a top in any apps i hope sohehdh