Yo nice story bro, what a unique story keep up the good work and i hope you succeed and if you have time you can read mine too!
it's a funny read, love the concept of the Mandara Lotus and QinLuo being heir not master or servant
it's a good ml system novel, I find very few like this one. really like the storyline. do post more.
Lost brain cells reading this . Story maybe good but so many grammatical mistakes. Looks a little better than mtl. Unless you are desperate to read three kingdom stories ( like me) I would not advise reading this if you are a new reader. Experienced readers who have already experienced the pain of mtl may like this…..
Honestly I don't know how to describe this feeling that I am getting while reading this book but If I have to put my finger on it then it would be UNCOMFORTABLE I mean a lot uncomfortable ? At first it was progressing well and nice when there was only one MC but then came our OG and that's where I started feeling weird, How MC teaches OG to make his own harem and how he even helps him. And then when Ayumi (a sub heroine) came in the picture and that's where my patience wore thin. I mean just look at how our MC (he himself) helped her (sub heroine) realise her fetish (being cuck queen) with OG. In my opinion it would have been best ( at least better than now) if you have let OG's story progress WITHOUT MC interference at all if you really were trying to create two MC's kinda story tho it would have been perfect if there was only one MC.There are a lot other things I would like to say but I will stop here as it will discourage other readersTo Author: A question for you, suppose you were a READER of this story (not Author), how do you think you would feel when you liked our MC (story wise) and Ayumi (literally) both, and suddenly there is a third person (OG) who f*** Ayumi huh?....I don't think it would be anything less for what I am feeling currently i.e., only if you don't have any weird fetish LOLSorry But I don't think I can stay in this journey with you any longer tho keep up the good work.
steering, for it needed the classiest maneuvers. You may yet doubt the people
Humans are creatures created by both the power of Light and Dark.
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
So he was not done yet too?
"HEY no fighting"RM
Shi Jieyi received the signal marking his quick and ferocious attacks and moaned even more loudly and indecently, making her moans much more arousing and enticing than usual. Her soft body matched Lin Tianlong's movements passionately while swaying up and down. When her body fell downwards, it made his member poke into the innermost flesh of her valley and resulted in her moaning loudly. Subsequently, she flailed her arms and hugged into him tightly.
Yan Zhangjian mengelus dagunya sebelum tertawa keras. Dia menepuk pundak Vaun dan tertawa: "Hahahahaha ... Aku tidak berpikir bahwa Vaun begitu berbakat dalam kerajinan juga. Untuk berpikir bahwa Anda dapat datang dengan instrumen yang dapat dimainkan oleh orang biasa, Anak Muda Vaun adalah benar-benar berbakat. Hahahaha. "