Although I'm only reviewing this at eight chapters, I have to say that your novel is great. The writing quality is a full on five as is the stability of updates. I love the plot and especially that even when your novel is about zombies, the people around the female lead are pretty realistic in their reactions.
Great novel with unique title. Never heard of something such as sausage system??. Anyways great story with good writing. The quality of story has increased with chapters. Hoping that author doesn't drop this novel cauz of some sausagehead( avoiding censorship). I just wanna say that you guys will get what u have expected from this novel.
best novel with great main character with great personality who actually knows what to do and what not to do.he is not like those stupid ass characters who go around walking just for faceslapping others. here mc is serious in thinking and doesn't think with his dick
This review is only grading for Writing Quality, Story Development, and Character Design, for reasons I will elucidate on later.WRITING QUALITYThe author has taken a serious gamble in writing in third-person present tense and I feel it hasn't paid off. This is a personal thing, but I mention it first because it can seriously impact how easily read the work is; third-person past tense is the standard for fiction for reasons. This isn't the reason for my score here, though.I was surprised and shocked in the course of going over this work to discover that it apparently has an editor. If I may make a suggestion, perhaps you should have spent less time arguing over using a pronoun and more time actually proofreading the thing, Mighty Editor.The author's grasp of appropriate punctuation and capitalization is very loose. The confusing convention of bracketing thoughts with periods (yes, I understand Inkstone doesn't allow formatting; there are still other ways to do it) only worsens the presentation when half of the things that should have periods at the end don't.Apostrophes keep getting thrown in where they don't belong. The author has his own creative ways of spelling certain words (phlegm is now flem apparently, for example). All-in-all it's a crapshow that desecrates the mother tongue.I rate this even lower than usual because this is apparently with an editor's assistance. Bad.STORY DEVELOPMENT / CHARACTER DESIGNI am exempting World Background from this review as it is a work using the real world (the stars given are the average of the work).The synopsis is useless. One might think the author of the work is solely relying on the popularity of novels with systems that get updated often enough to carry the work, but that would be cynical of me to suggest so I won't.The author seems to mistake "slang use" for "character". Applied to side characters to denote class/status or used with auxiliaries or a main with more personality than a potato, it's a useful tool. This is not the situation here; the slang is the character here.The main character is a stupid, ugly, dirty, whiny slob. That's his trait list, more or less. There isn't a whit of charm or even something intriguing to care about. The others characters are this but in stiffer cardboard.SUMMARY AND AN EXTRA WORD OR TWOThe work is a painful slog through a minefield of bad formatting and creative attempts at reforging the English language anew. The characters could all die in nuclear fire and the world would be better for it. This isn't the same as writing a "love to hate" villain, for the record; they're just that abominable.Why did I not include Stability of Updates? Because I've decided to not rate that anymore when the prose is abominable like it is here. I no longer wish to encourage authors to churn out factory crap at the expense of using a straightforward spelling and grammar checker (again, amazed that this work supposedly has an editor).The other thing I have to note: I'm not sure if this work is a genuine effort anyway. Lazy synopsis, lazy cover, short chapters with zero TLC, and the author seems to launch himself from inflammatory position to inflammatory position in a ball of flame to put the Hindenburg to shame.I'll make no judgment of the various attempts at self-immolation. Instead I'll just note my personal opinion that it's monumentally stupid to insult a major demographic base for the site, which largely draws from an audience in SE Asia.Whether troll work or genuine, I would not recommend this to anybody for anything except a master class on what not to do. If this is indeed a parody of the "low effort system novel" trend, I do not want to encourage any more of it. If it is genuinely written, I still do not want to encourage any more of it. I just want the pain to stop.
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Plot armor too thick. Just 10 chapters and the MC already got 3 special items, and a special boss in every wave even if it's supposed to be RARE. MC is too lucky.The side characters are also stupid, the typical chinese childish arrogant people, while the MC seems to be the only one with a brain.Every character seems to have a mental age of 10, only later I remember that they are supposed to be *****.
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Infinite in mystery is the gift of the GoddessWe seek it thus, and take to the skyRipples form on the water's surfaceThe wandering soul knows no rest.
Though story had potential.....I was wrong.Basically turned into a harem erotica, what little good the story had died after about 30 chaps.
Gao Peng and Ye Xuan both have system to upgrade beast easily as long they have the materials for it.Gao Peng had Merciful Liberator Zi as his first contract pet, his family centipede. Ye Xuan first contracted pet is his family elf.When Gao Peng need materials for evolution, he ask his grandpa(later chapter), in this novel Ye Xuan ask Lin Shiru (from the start)Gao Peng had a space sttribute Jellyfish and Treasure Seeker Mouse, in this novel Ye Xuan got a snail? that has space attribute and love treasure.Gao Peng's Jelly fish love to sit on Gao Peng head and looks like a hat, the same with Ye Xuan snail.If you have read Monster Pet Evolution you'll find a lot of similarities in this novel, but I like MPE more than this novel because Gao Peng character is more likeable than Ye Xuan. Gao Peng is a lone wolf, no one to rely on except for Da Zi.while Ye Xuan got everything from the start, and keep getting furtuitous encounter one and another.Gao Peng pets most of them is a trash monster but he upgrade it into a strong and domineering monster, and he has emotional attachment to most of them.Ye Xuan pet that close to Gao Peng's is only the elf Xiao Wan I think? although this novel isn't better than MPE, I don't mind to read this in my spare time.
This is honestly just my personal opinion. I enjoyed the first 150 or so chapters, but the further it went the more conflicted the story felt. where I've left off there are alot of holes and confusing/conflicting concepts starting to go through the blender and it simply killed my interest in the story. Don't get me wrong I'm all for other worlds and magic/cultivation type things, i just feel like it was overstuffed, leaving a lot of loose ends that are essentially kicked out/cut by way of a time skip. the confusion then continues on from there with alternate dimensions as well as other worlds, not to mention the whole "this is all a book/novel come to life
Story in a nutshell...Side character to Chen Beixuan: Hey, I challenge you. What? Cat got your tongue already..? Heh?! What a wuss!Chen: Courting Death!!