Very intrigued to see where this will go. The writer’s sense of detail when portraying the subject is keen. My only critique might be off of how forward some of the introduction is. Keep up the great work!
I mean the story is very boring, there's so much transition from future and the past, like mann can you just calm the fck down, i mean like wtf its very confusing. Example the next chapter will be in the future instantly then will show you the future mc, like i mean if you're gonna show the future mc whats the point of building the character right wtf
This is a great start for a very polished work. I am really enjoying the premise and look forward to future chapters.
I like this story very much, Download this for just this story ????
⚠️ Be warned, this story is so good, you’ll be crying once you’ve caught up and have to wait for the daily updates!Here’s why I love it…ahem…*drum roll*✅ It has transmigration. Transmigration and rebirth stories are my favorite.✅ It drives me nuts when you are reading a story and the transition between scenes feels awkward or confusing. But, this story is well written and it flows. And when the FL encounters troublesome characters, the arguments don’t involve trashy language like you get in a lot of other stories. ✅ I’m not sure how much romance will be in this story. Even though I would love to see more interactions between the ML and FL, the story is so good that I don’t mind. The FL transmigrates into the character of a young girl. The story may seem slow because you get to read about and see her progression instead of the author just telling you. But, that just means we get more to read!✅ I love strong and capable FL’s and ML’s.I ❤️ Sorahana! You are an amazing writer!
Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is satisfactory
The Story is Good and there is the Pictures as a Great Bonus at every chapters, here I leave All Five Stars for You!Keep your spirit, Author! ???
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Overused trope with a shallow plot and laughable character development. Magic system is a joke. Passable read to waste time......................................
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excellent job author you have created a proper story line with excellent background for the upcoming wars now you just have to make it to the future but am sure you have it covered.
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