The design of this world the author has created isbreally unique and refreshing take on "system like" novels with the main character's "book" and "reader" abilities he accumulated over time. While the "book" ability system seems a little confusing at first, it constantly is being further updated and explained in great detail throughout the story.The author does a great job explaining the world and the details when we need to know them to understand the novel. I was very pleasantly surprised with the amount of attention to detail that was put into this story, and appreciate the thoughtful consideration the author put into creating this world for us to read.I look forward to see how this story progresses for Leo and what kind of abilities he will get, and the heights he will reach. I hope we'll get to see him experience more roles as a "reader" in different and interesting worlds.
I'm now a shameless review writer.This is the second novel that I have written. Actually, this is a remake of my previous novel, so you can consider this my first novel.Because the previous novel that I made used my first language and the story I felt was not satisfactory.I finally decided to remake.I can't say that my novel is good but I'll let you guys judge for yourselfIf you see a mistake I'm sorry, English is not my first language.I would really appreciate it if you guys support me, thank you.
Translation seems to be fine. Book writing seems to be very *******ish, with rules and explanations all over the place. Book is written in chronological order but explanations for events and the “system” are unclear and explained at seemingly random times, usually in the form of garble.Story appears to be somewhere in between a comedy and a cultivation adventure novel with game elements, but it doesn’t really succeed with either and is neither funny or intuitive.Author has an addiction to using girl-related analogies to explain his feelings regarding certain topics.The actual reasons for events in question are poorly written and glossed over, story is not up to standard.
Great story, solid world building, unique but solid concepts, interesting characters, unique locations ........Really looking forward to the updates.
Having a blast with this one. Opens with great hook as the protagonist fights for his life out at sea against creatures and is apparently drowning, before jumping back in time to bring the reader up to speed. The writing style is certainly unique and the author is a great story-teller. Moves at a great pace which keeps the reader glued to the screen. Certainly seems like an epic novel thus far. Good effort.
The novel is basically a direct copy of Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top. The setting and plot was copied, commiting copyright infringement. It is a lower quality version of it too. Chapters (at least time of reading) were not edited that great (baddish grammar). With chapters being pretty short too, and so far it is just (essentially sameish) developmemt skipping the details in the original, I gave up on continuing reading. I like that some1 is contuing the saga os Elawn, but u need to at least make it fan fic or change a lotbof stuff, case u r stealing property and can get in a lot of trouble. Don't sign a contract either if stuff isnt changed, since I wouldnt be surprised if they take huge advantage down the road like debt+fines, at least credit the novel btw..
I'm currently on chapter 172, It's a decent urban novel to pass the time. As a harem novel the main heroine doesn't really play much of a role... In fact his landlord seems to be the main heroine ?So far there are 5 heroines: 1.) His landlord 2.) The cross-dresser3.) Crossdresser 's best friend who talks a mile a minute4.) MC's highschool class monitor, and a 5.) National news anchor whom MC had a crush on during college.BTW if anyone can find the chapter: 【172】You didn’t come back last night?please let me know ?
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
A great start can’t wait to see where its going. Somethings in the beginning like the Mc adaptability were a little questionable but you had the fl’s reactions to make up for it. I’d give the beginning a 4.5 out of 5
I ONLY READ WHAT THE BOOK IS ABOUT AND ITS STUPID!! Y WOULD ANYONE READ A BOOK ABOUT SOMEONE ONLY SUMMING A SCARECROW??? ITS ONE OF TUE STUPIDEST TH9S 8 HEARD OF!!!!
who in there right mind gives power stones to this awful novel it's clearly bots this website is filled with bots for god knows what reason but it's a real tragedy since some good novels like i cultivate passively won't be translated
this comes from author of legendary mechanic what more do you expect a well written story it's great the projection worlds are not just simple simulation but actual worlds this story gonna be lit hope the webnovel picks it up