There's so much potential in this novel! I'm not sure how to characterize it, butI'm confident that it will improve as the story goes on. Even though I've only read the first chapter, I have no doubt that the author will keep writing better chapters to make this book even better! Let's hope for a clever and enjoyable voyage!The first few chapters had a feeling of being about everyday life.
Shameless newbie author here! This is my first time writing a novel. I'm really enjoying the process of creating this story and really hope y'all enjoy it as well. Feedback is most definitely appreciated, be easy on me though it's my first novel. I will definitely implement ideas you guys have and whatever feedback you leave. For right now, I will upload 2 chapters. Hopefully in the future I can pump out more chapters while still keeping the quality perfect! Again, thank you for reading and hope you enjoy!!!
Good job author this piece is really cool
Another good novel from the author with a great premise not original but at least well done with a consistent updates schedule but at the end of the day nothing is perfect.So for the flaws that I found in this novel :-well first there’s a lot of repetition like in his other novels idk if it is intentional to reach words counts or is it bcz of some app that he use to correct the grammar and spelling mistakes, don’t get me wrong there’s not that many mistakes If there’s any tbh I don’t remember if there is, so using those app maybe the reason in every it say the same thing over and over again just with different world -second like his other novels the MC start already with all the knowledge about magics and runes but we don’t know how did he get that knowledge or why did he even having, like in abyss lord we learn that the mc basically was the pioneer of rune mastery, in this novel instead we learn that he was from the same original universe zatiel came from the AI chip and all and reincarnated in the same universe too in the race that he created but zatiel never knew about it or mentioned it in that novel, okay I get the author just like the concept of the statut panel to easily explain his power progression, but for me taking the part of learning and discovering runes again is kinda dissapointing and how does those runes even works in this universe bcz u said the laws of physics don’t work anymore and work with different laws and rules so I just don’t understand how they work and all that knowledge just becomes deus machina to come in clutch when they’re in a pitch-third the timespan/timeline of the story isn’t quit clear maybe it’s just me -the MC is kinda too much heroic like he doesn’t have what to be a king I guess that’s what happen when u are depravita of wrath it’s kinda isn’t the ideal race to rule a kingdom, I hope in the future he will fuse it with its counterpart one that doesn’t rely on emotional power like zatiel did by combining the abyssal with the angelic Well this is my review I recommend reading this novel and the author other novels Ps: author I hope u wouldn’t succumb to temptation like u did last time and go the harem route just keep it one single female lead
man I blew threw this book in three days. Definitely recommend
I personally like this book as this develops my imagination
Don’t know why this masterpiece doesn’t have a review yet. I’ll be the first, keep going author.
It is a good novel to read and has some flaws but the author is obviously trying his best, so we all must try our best to help him succeed. if you are looking for a novel to read this is it don't disregard it as the potential is infinite.
Compelling plot, unexpected twists. More please!
I throughly enjoy this first chapter. It’s something new, something different and it’s categorized as realistic fiction which is a first for me. I’ve always enjoyed realistic movies so I’m very interested in your novel. Definitely a good Read fellow readers!
It would be a cool novel if his life wasn't controlled by his family.And I hate MC that break his promise so.and its was good novel at first but after his promise with his father this novel has fallen and fallen so thanx until now. Me After Promise shit:
When I was reading this I kept feeling something was missing, and only until I reached the chapter where he talked to the general I realized what that was. I don't know our Mc, and I don't mean his backstory, I mean I don't know why he acts like he acts, I don't know why he does A instead of B, and he does so just cause. His evolution options seem absolutely nonsensical to me, because it's never established what type of person he is. And if the lens through which we see your world are dull then the world will inevitably be as dull as a well.