cheriii
I love the hell out of the story!! amazing!! keep up the amazing work
When is the next chapter coming out
nice chapter ☺️☺️☺️ please
They all are a big mafia and plotters who plot against everyone for money and fame. These loser authors who make different new ids and promote them with their old one should not think of them to be so smart. This is a plagiarized book and everyone supporting it is a loser and a cheater.
The sensory details in this chapter are INSANE. Let me just start with the opening image: deep inside an abandoned textile factory, dim light, collapsed concrete pillars, waist-high weeds. Su Nianqiu leaning against a moss-covered pillar, looking like a cautious old farmer. You can literally feel the dampness, the decay, the danger of that space. It's not just a backdrop—it's a character. This is a world where black market deals happen in ruined buildings, where people hide in shadows and speak in whispers. Then there's the ginseng reveal. 'The overpowering, rich scent of ginseng, carrying the fragrance of soil and vegetation, wafted out.' Even in a dim dead corner, that smell cuts through everything. It's almost magical how the author uses scent to make the ginseng feel alive and precious against the dead, decaying environment. But the scene that really blew my mind is the transition back to the spatial dimension. She leaves the black market, winds through alleyways, slips into a half-collapsed dilapidated temple with rampant weeds and spiderwebs—and then she's IN the Spirit Spring Water. Crystal clear. Cool. Icy. The contrast between the dirty, dangerous outside world and this pristine inner sanctuary is *chef's kiss*. And then the transformation: ten minutes, that's all it takes. The withered old man is gone, replaced by a charming village belle with fair skin and bright eyes. The spatial dimension isn't just a plot device—it's her safe house, her dressing room, her sanctuary. It makes the world feel so much bigger and more layered. You have the gritty reality of the black market, the decaying temple, and then this hidden spiritual space that exists parallel to it all. The worldbuilding here is seamless—every location feels alive and purposeful.
I’m not giving 5 stars till I see a finished book. Why no updates. Why start books if not finishing. Also don’t understand concept of not putting complete books up and writing as you go. It’s frustrating
Love it so far!!
I am so loving this story! Killian is trying so hard to deny his feelings but the tenderness he feels her Natalie makes my heart ache. I’m only on Chapt 15 but I can’t put this book down! Natalie is a true queen!
And now Rosalie is near death???!!!! This is ridiculously STUPID! Please hurry and finish this book cause we're all getting ripped off with the repeating foolishness
horrible writing and totally degrading to the female character.
Haha tell us again how omegas aren’t important. Guess what they are wrong the goddess says so
Sweet story! I can’t wait to read the next one!
