the power system and it's explanation is hard to grasp(for me atleast). something about this world...it's just feels ...dunno how to say it...something is not good about it. main plot is very good tho
Binged this story for two whole days. It's honestly one of the best stories you can find and probably in my top 10 best post apocalyptic stories of all time.
The first 400 or so chapter were great, but sadly it doesn’t last forever. I notice around 500 or so chapter, that the writing quality started to go down, maybe it just from the frequent uploads, but it started to make me cringe and more easily mad. I get that it’s for Ain’s development. but Overall it still ok but now It more cringy and so.I’m gonna still read it - and this is just my opinion hope you don’t take this too seriously.sorry for my grammar!
Waaa, a sequel ❤❤❤ I really can't wait for this story developments ❤❤❤ Thank you for writing this, I'll wait patiently even if it's painful for me, LOL ???
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In the start, the story is very interesting. Although there times when his ex throws the whole story line, the action part, ecchi scenes are well planned and written. Our main character who is a 16 year old teenager, his mentality, his behavior, his actions, his personality is like a 20 year old or more. This makes the story even more amazing. The MC does opposite of what I thought he would do.
An interesting story. Nice opening. The development of each character is very good. I also like the writing style of this author. Even though I have only read a few chapters, the writing is very understandable and very clear. I don't really understand punctuation but as far as I read it is good.Keep up this fine writing!
Rough start for the main character, but he finds ways to adapt. Curious approach to learning for the MC. Still trying to decide how much more of the book that I will read, but think it is worth reading a few chapters to see if the webnovel catches your interest.
This is pretty good so far. There are a few things that should be fixed like; you don’t need to write out ALL the stats some is fine, the interactions between people do not seem natural and the characters have not really been described so it’s hard to picture what they look like. The characters should really be described better, I usually see some sort of movie in my head of what is going on but in this book that doesn’t really happen.
-A bit of a shaky start, but it gets better.-The chapters are longer than average. So if you saw the number of chapters and thought "Nah I want books with more chapters to binge read." don't let that be a deal breaker.Too early to say anything else, but still leaving a review so more people may find it.Best of luck, LC_Icey.
the mc is no longer male, place the story in the female lead section --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Need more chap to get review like what that other said, but it's good tho, just need more chapters (again?) so yeahI support you author, do your best!!