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if any of this was original I would give this a higher review but overall it's extremely generic and lacks in certain areas. you could find this story about a couple dozen different ways.
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Poor editing. Hard to read with the irregular spacing. Increasing word count. NXhchdhxhxhxhxhxhxhxhxhxhchf gxycucucjdnfjcjcjcjcjcucucivigivivjg
It's a shame it wasn't chosen, I love novels in which the MC is immortal! Does anyone know anything else to recommend that the MC is immortal?I'll try to continue reading this in MTL, but from what I've seen the writing seems almost unintelligible.
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The story was developing in a good manner but nowadays due to bad update schedule the fun seems to be gone. please make the update schedule regular. been waiting for the chapters for a while
There are stupid tribal black savages in this book .... Typical racist chinese worldview. If you are a racist b@stard then this is for you.
It is basically impossible to read the book without having headaches, putting aside the regular errors seen in most books, the punctuations are literally absent and what's with the '
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The plot moved at a leisurely pace for me. It didn't have to be established right away, but it did pique the interest of those who were attracted by the trope. As I continued to read the novel, I became aware that the MC's backstory was slightly off with his personality. And, given that it is his story, I believe the author is well-versed in it. So, reinforcing that point, I believe the author will go into greater detail about the narrative and the MC. And I believe there will be some growth in him, given he was once a mage and now wishes to become a cultivator for personal reasons. Of course, I suspect there will be a significant plot here, and I am hoping for it.
This novel is similar to many already posted long ago on this platform i don't want to be rude to any readers and publishers, but all they did was change all of the characters names. The plot is basically the same and everything like many others have said this novel is a knockoff of another.
This is really well done,. Character,plot,romance all well done and doing good so far so I hope this gets picked. It can be very addictive if you like the genre.