I am not normally into this genre but this book had me from the beginning. I love the action and the humour of the MC. 10/10 would recommend. The writing quality is strong and the description places you into the MC world, almost like you can see it yourself. Love this :)
Honestly, i thought the plot armor was not that big of a deal. I was wrong, terribly and extremely wrong. This is a force field of plot armor, it spread everywhere and affect everything. But if you can deal with it it become a funny story
In my subjective opinion, I quite like this novel but somehow the translation is getting worse since the beginning or maybe the editing..anyway, reading it now is not enjoyable with the writing lines or paragraph all over the place.
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To be honest, there are two things you need to fix. Firstly, the use of punctuation for some of the dialogues, it'd be better if you insert commas.Secondly, you always repeating the action but also including it in your dialogue e.g. He sighed. "Sigh..."In this situation, if you already wrote the character's action, you don't need to express it in the dialogue because readers could tell the character was sighing
Got to say, Pretty good novel. hardly any errors With grammar, second its got an intersting stsrt and good characters with a lot of mystery. addiTional its Got a bit of a dark mc wHich i love
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I like the story and have recently been reading it and it is fantastic in my opinion and I hope there will be more chapters (currently chappter 496)
Story is fantastic. Pity that all the recent translations are poor and hard to read. Currently can't even follow the story due to the translation quality.
Awesome story with the cultivation system you came to expect from Er Gen but with much more humor than previous stories. A story with friendship and feel-good father in-laws and a funny side kick you’ll come to love.
4/5 + until Black Rock Ruins, then the quality drops real fast. The translation is good but there are issues with pronouns in most of the chaps, but it was still okay. The story was progressing nicely and everything was good.But during Black Rock Ruins, everything goes downhill, the translation goes off, there is even no mention of who the pronoun is denoting. Then there is a continuous series of face slapping moments. MC defeats one guy whom everyone thinks he can't defeat and persuades him to step back. then another guy comes and same thing keeps on repeating. Dropping the novel now. Might resume it if it gets completed.
I think they are starting to recycle pilots. I remember this one from a couple of months ago.??????????????????????????