This story is amazing, the characters feel genuine at least the main and secondary ones the rest don't really matter lol. The different Qi's reminds me of reverend Insanity which is cool however what I didn't like was the author making the the MC's assistant start with fire qi which is constantly used by every mc out there and it's just annoying seeing as he had 6 elements to chose from and he chose fire but it's fine just a minor thing. As for world building it's very good but I just hooe the author doesn't introduce stuff too quick and then gets overwhelmed by everything and then forgets about something. Story is developing nicely I just really wish to see more of the family. Also going back to the Qi's I really wish that the author introduces more characters with uncommon qi types like poison,sound,wood,water etc However these are just my preferences and the author can do what he wants. As for the updates they are very frequent just that the chapters are short or atleast they feel short. but the quality isn't really dropping so just keep doing what your doing author and you'll be fine
Oh This Sound Cool I Wonder If It Will Be Like The Others I Choose Which WAS DENIED BECAUSE IT WASN'T ROMANCE OR CULTIVATION, SERIOUSLY WEBNOVELS? Sure The Reader Awaiting For It Was Not Comparable To The Absolutely Garbage Cultivation Novel(No Offense) Was Released, BUT PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD GIVE US SOMETHING UNIQUE
The premise is already stupid. Do you even realize how long it would take to practice for billions of times? How long is one training? Take for example that it would takes 5 minutes to complete one set of training, to even do that set of training 1 billion of times it would take 9.5 thousands years, and that is only for 1 billion, when it says billionS. This is also considering you don't do anything and just train without food, sleep, interacting, no pause at all, etc...Even if he gets faster as he does it continously it would still take THOUSANDS of years. This is almost as stupid as those check in novels."CoNgraTULaTiON! yOu cHeCkED IN fOr x100000 strEnGTh PoiNtS!" Can't we get actual serious novels that have a plot instead of these wishing fulfillment jokes? We didn't have an actual good novel for months, I bet half of these novel are just gonna get translated for some months before being dropped too.
Honestly! I smiled when i read the first line of the synopsis!Creative!I cant wait to read through and see whats its about all in all.A must read!
A great story so far and everything but I just want to ask does Hana actually end up with that Julius guy I personally think it would be better if Hana also gets together with Riley (they not blood related)
The world development in this novel is really top notch and compared to that I think the character development is a bit slow pace but hopefully it will soon get great details too. Just one thing, I would like to suggest you to not start every sentence in a new para with a 'The' I saw a lot like that and although I personally love large paras many people don't so try to include some single short sentences between the paras sometimes and use the spacing a bit better. Besides the story is going great and also I would love to see more of those character arts of yours so keep posting them too?
Hi, the author here. It's my first novel guys. I am pretty inexperienced about but I will try to become better at this. I hope you will enjoy this novel.
Amazing writing quality and fleshed out characters. The story is so good that it makes me loose the sense of time. Aah the flow .... I wish I had the author's skills
If I was an author this would look like a book that i would write. The story is good but the writing needs a little bit more attention, I think u were in a too much hurry to release it or got lost in thinking about the story that u didn't spent much time on the writing, I'm sure you can correct it and make it more comfortable for more people to read in the future if u can review the previous chapters and correct it. Overall this book is good and I hope that in the future u can keep up with the updates. Sincerely reader?
Author here. So I reuploaded this cause it fit the WPC. I might as well try right? Anyways, get ready for more crack inducing chapters and maybe even more.
Its one of the best web novels I have found.. that's for free, and in general better than some that you can pay for.The Synopsis says really what the story is about, there is only one feature that I don't like.The repetions of how pretty the main character is a bit too much and a bit too fantasized. but that's it.
i love the storyy??❤️❤️ love the mystery, love the plotline, love the characters too especially natasha, valerian, theo, and many???. going to waitt for the update?? just finished read it from chapter 1 till now. sorry author if i have so many comment on every piece of chapter's hehehe, i really curious about the storyline and kinda love to make a comments about it☺️ keep the good works?? and please dont ever drop this novel, i have so many villainess novel i've read and the author have dropped it suddenly:(