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Can somebody tell me why mc is trash ? I mean is he a pushover, simp, dense or what. ?
There is no orcs or rape in the story It is true that the novel is serious and mature and bloody but there is no other Orcs nonsense or nonsense
This story is currently on hiatus until around the first week of June, the author is currently on a cruise and trying to finish the 4th book of his Adelheid series, so if everything goes as per the author's plan, he will continue writing the story in around the first week of June. (The author posted an update on R0y@lR0@d.)
I got to chapter 31 so this comment is based on that.
I really wanted to like this story. It has great ideas....but there are no tags for harem and already its the cliches male protagonist surrounded by flirty/tsundre females. I could maybe deal with that if it wasnt so prominent. [I mean 3 helpers are introduced so far and you guesses it all 3 are either flirty or tsundre females. Not one male co lead yet. That spells cliche male wish fulfilment to me] Not to mention he barely has to work for things and its given to him.
His shop. Hidden rewards. I'm not sure how he survived ao far without a bossy AI to explain every little thing to him...he is 23 but needs to still have his hand held.
The biggest issue is with him drooling over his mom turned AI and his complete subservient attitude towards females especially his mom. He literally bows and apologizes for little things because his mom/ai has attitude issues and gets prissy over little things. I would prefer this if the AI was more detached and artificial then a flirty bad tempered mom bot.
Yes, with the same name and it have around 80 chapter
When is the volume 3 coming outThe suspense is much
What this novel was dropped half way through? ToT why. Although the romance is a bit cheesy with some questionable actions it’s a decent novel. The only bad thing is the low amount of chapters and the probability that this was dropped half way through. T-T we just got to a good part with some drama.His power is essentially reinforced plot armor. He can do anything as long as if it triggers his power for that subject beforehand. Chinese to english translation isn’t that great but it’s readable.6.5/10 Not amazing, but not bad.
What I read so far is amazing and I cant wait to see how far this will go and how the story develops![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The chapters are too wordy. The essence of what the author is trying to convey is lost within irrelevant, long and wordy sentences which could have been phrased in a much better way.
Author of godly abomination returns comes through with another one. I don't know how his writing quality keeps getting better and better when it's already one of the best on webnovel. This is a must read and I can tell that this story is gonna be at the top soon.
I KNOW THAT MANY ARE THINKING THAT THIS NOVEL IS VERY SLOWPACEDAND EVEN I THINK THAT(BUT FROM THE LATEST CHAPTERS I AM DOUBTING THAT IT ISN'T SO CAUSE IN JUST TWO MONTHS AFTER RELEASING THE GAME PEOPLE HAVE REACHED LIKE TRUE EMPEROR REALM AND THERE MIGHT BE SOME PEOPLE ABOVE THAT, THAT HAVE YET TO SHOW UP). SECONDLY, ARE TALENTED PEOPLE THAT COMMON OR ARE TALENTS THAT EASY TO ACQUIRE ? I MEAN HEAVEN GRADE BODIES, IMMORTAL GRADE BODIES, GOD GRADE TALENTS ETC. THE NOVEL HAS DEPICTED MANY PEOPLE WITH SUCH TALENTS AND SOME HAVE EVEN DIED (ISN'T IT A BIT TOO FAST)THIRD, IS CULTIVATION THAT EASY? THERE ARE MANY CULTIVATION NOVEL OUT THERE AND ALL OF THEM TELL ONE THING FOR CERTAIN THAT CULTIVATION IS A VERY LONG AND ARDUOUS JOURNEY, IT'S VERY DIFFICULT TO BREAK THROUGH THE HIGHER YOU GET, THE NOVEL ALSO SHOWS THAT BY INCREASING THE AMOUNT OF QI REQUIRED; BUT PLAYERS HAVE REACHED CLOSE TO THE SAINT REALM IN TWO MONTHS OF CULTIVATION. FOURTH, THERE ARE NO QUESTS. FIFTH, SOME THINGS JUST GIVES THE FEELING OF IT BEING SHORT OR INCOMPLETE (CULTIVATION SYSTEM/ ALCHEMY SYSTEM) SIXTH, THE PART WITH SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY(IS SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY THE ONLY RARE INGREDIENT ? AND IF ITS RARE LATER THAT CONCEPT ALSO KIND OF FADED AWAY AFTER SEEING THE MC GET SO MANY OF THEM) AND IF YOU PICK THE WRONG ONE THEN ALL WILL START WILTING BUT THERE MIGHT ATLEAST BE SOME ALCHEMIST WHO MIGHT/SHOULD HAVE RESEARCHED IT, ARE THE ALCHEMISTS THAT WEAK? AND MC WAS ABLE TO GET THEM ALL ONLY BECAUSE OF THE ALCHEMY GOD'S INHERITANCE(WHICH IS SHOWN AS A TECHNIQUE IN THIS NOVEL) . SEVENTH, IF THE GAME WORLD IS A REAL WORLD AND THE POWERS THERE COULD BE BOUGHT INTO REALITY, THEN THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE SHOWN THE SIGNS BY NOW;I MEAN THE MC DID GO THROUGH MORTAL CLEANSING .SUMMARY- THERE ARE TOO MANY BLANK SPOTS(LOOP HOLES)OUT THERE WHICH LEADS TO THE FEELING OF INCOMPLETENESS. THE NOVEL COULD HAVE BEEN MADE MUCH BETTER .
The synopsis is amazing but the actually story is really bad. Lot of things doesn't make sense and the author is constantly contradicting himself. It's like he's taking the readers for idiots. The MC is really bad. I do not recommend at all...
