hi I'm the author of this novel. this is my debut work so I know that my writing skills suck. i hope you like it
Very good writing quality but very poor story design . There is no sense of anticipation in the first half of the story because of the synopsis.
It is a delightful novel. This is for people who want to be set back and relax watch how Patrick destroys everyone, but I'll say that the updates on this Are little slow so bear with it
I have read few chapters so far, and it has been a fun ride. The constant confrontation between the Host and its system is fun to watch. The idea itself is pretty interesting. It is a great story, and I will continue to read it.
Fun, but bad. Some things dont make sense. People find things in conversations that never happened and come to a conclusion that is somehow right. World is weird. MC doesn’t just buy a house to get out of his bad situation and instead just hoards it.
the depth of thought that went into the world building is amazing. many have tried to tie a game world to the real one, but this takes it to a beautiful level. there is a solid reason the game world is so realistic and the struggle feels as heavy as it should to make the revelations really shocking. the pace can feel long but the payoff is worth it and the relationships are reflective of that. kudos to this story and wish I could blast it with gifts!
One of the best novels I have ever read it keeps me on my toes (not really) wanting more my only real complaint is the slow release speed! I would Highly recommen this bookd
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Beautiful horrifying. I feel like each story has creepy subtle hints of what is coming. I can't wait for more! If you like horror, this is a great book for you! It gives me chills.
Congratulations!?I loved how you mentioned about mother,sister and your responsibilities to take care of them.It was interesting... looking forward to hearing more about the novel from you.To go a long way... kudos to you and your family!
NOVEL IS GOOD. CHARACTER PROGRESSION IS GOOD. SOME CHAPTER ARE SLOW BUT ITS OK. SO WHAT NOW AUTHOR-NIM? STILL ON HIATUS? ILIKE THE NOVEL SO PLEASE CONTINUE. LOL
Beautiful. You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential