Even though it has the fantasy tag, the story feels somewhat closer to a romance novel. Which is fine on its own, but I honestly don't like romance so a heads up would have been appreciated.Still, I found myself dragged into a rather well made story, with decent'y human-like side characters who have their own lives going on in the background, and not just static dialogue-box NPCs like in games or other novels.A good story so far, but too few chapters.
I liked the character marquis he was sweet keep up the good work and make it more exciting I need more chapters and I hope you do well From your new fan : Benjamin
So far, it's interesting. Not much has happened, but this story has potential.
Hey everyone! I’m a new writer here, and I’d love to hear your thoughts on my story. If you're enjoying it, feel free to drop a comment—I’d love to interact with you all! If there's anything you're not liking or think could be improved, don't hesitate to leave your critiques as well. I'm always open to feedback and looking to make the story better. Thanks for reading, and I hope you stick around for more!
am telling y'all yo gonna fall in love with this ,It is well written story driven am still work on character design ,about updating stability i update immediately within hours am basing this story like genshin impact open world game ??Am fairly new at this. 7.5/10
This book gave me a trippy feel, when I read the first chapter it made me start forming ideas of what might be going on. Then it jumps to a different perspective, the story starts a smooth progression forward making it all come together. It is pleasantly written and reads easy. You can get lost in the world that is built in this wonderfully fantasy tail.
More feedback = more chapters. I hope you enjoy it.No romance, no harem, no yuri. It's straight action, so I hope you enjoy it.Feedback and reviews are appreciated.
Your dedication and hard work are truly impressive and deserving of recognition. Keep up the excellent work! ?? With a bit more practice, you can enhance your writing skills even further. We all believe in you!
mc is cuck.....,........ don't read it...
Hey Guys author of My vampire system here. This is my Third system book! Set in Modern day time , based around underground fighting and gang crime. This is under a non exclusive contract so had to upload on a different account
It is my first apocalyptic novel and I totally love it ? the writing quality, characters and the description of the setting are elaborate, and the thrill of coming events put you on a delicious edge, ?thanks dear author for your imagination and writing skills. And more chapters please ?
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