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Maybe include spoiler !!!!Not recomend for ******** action-game like readers. No OP MC. The first chatpers are storybuilding arc thats why its lack action scenes. Differrent profession between NPC and Players is quite interesting idea (will take long chapters to explain all system anyways).
Very well written story, the book has a very good story with lots of potential for growth. I just hope that the author doesn't give up on it
If you drop this novel i will hunt you till the end of the word. =]Tks I love this story, The mc is such deep character for a Cultivaton/vrmmo novel,amazing. Bring the thunder!
Its Good, But not as i expected, Author End it Early without letting us see the fight against extraterrestrial only he show how it descended, Even Not Complete Descend only saying Human We Descend Ended, Everything is good But not as you expected Like its summary its all fake, It End Fast And His territory id only span of a small valley and flatten mountain he didnt even let us see the late game only early stage, He keep saying late stage, when the extraterrestrial invaded his force is still weak, suck suck. World character updating translation all is fine but story is extremely disappointing.
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The book is good no doubt about it, the author has a different sense of writing which is called "camparism" he like to compare things to much without proper info just based on behavior and looks which is sometimes annoying. Every chapter has comparison of some kind in it. Overall if you're a knew reader without reading other great cultivation novels this is good one for you for old readers the cliches are too much, the harem tag will kill this book because the mc seems horny all the time and is attracted to every female he meets.I enjoy harems but mindless one's are horrible to read, Other than those it's a good book the author can do better though with proper research for his readers.
I’ve read the first 75 chapters so far and find the story interesting. The writing while not the best keeps you interested in the story and each chapter is better than the last.The transitions between the point of view (POV) don’t flow smoothly especially at the beginning however the tone is consistent. The chapters are at a decent length (aka not too short).I added the story to my library as i am looking forward to how the story progresses and improves.Theres not a lot of world developement in the 1st 75 chapters but there is character development for 2 of the characters. Some of the development of the main character could have been explained more before the multiple time jumps.
Imagine living life on easy mode. Scratch that, imagine living life on 'easier than easy' mode. This novel's protagonist is living it. MC's initialisation gift [from the system] is enough for him to advance to the next cultivation stage. The bonus reward for attaining the next stage is...enough points to advance to the stage after. Oh, and upon advancing each stage the MC will also conveniently be gifted everything he needs. From the very best cultivation manual, alchemy production, weapon crafting, and of course can't forget apex combat skills. If all of this wasn't enough the protagonist is a complete rock. He feels nothing. He believes in nothing. He wants for nothing. He just cultivates.
You want me to spend 4000 spirit stones just so i can read 50 chapters ahead that i actually read 7 days ago due to mass release but it's now locked up because of your new privilage function??!?!?!?!?! Hahaha I would rather drop this book.