It has gotten VERY interesting. The way Edward and callums relationship has changed is amazing. Bothe characters have grown to be quite complex very fast.
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I will give a summary of the situation that the MC is in until chapter 7I'll be pretty vague so you don't have to worry about spoilerthe MC dies and reincarnates, and he was purposely reincarnated, it is possible that even his death was planned, hard to say, only the chapters released in the future will tellIn this world where he reincarnated he has a system that helps him get stronger and has the ability to go back in time (save / load)why he needs a system that strengthens him? things are not always what they seem and many monsters mingle in society, as if that were not enough, when MC looks at his own status he finds that he has "an extremely tempting smell to certain beings"meaning the MC is a walking feast for these thingsI highly recommend reading this story, I'm already pleased when the MC is not stupid, so when I find a MC who is smart and quick-thinking like that, with a thought that follows such a logical pattern, it's like finding a pearl in through the mud.Some may say that realism is lacking when he defeats his first enemy, since he does it in cold blood, without any second thoughts or emotional impact, I tell these people that you are forgetting 2 things, the first is that MC has spent more of 160 years in the middle of nowhere, waiting to reincarnate, and even counting up to 5 billion seconds, this shows an inhuman willpower, second, the enemy has killed him several times in different timelines, it was only natural that any compassion that one can exist for this thing fades after all this.Again, I really enjoyed this story and recommend it, even if I have few chapters so far (7), it proves very promising.The only thing that intrigues me so far is the title, why ... yandere?
It feels like, I am watching a high-quality movie. I read a lot of english novels that good but this is above them. It just that. Excellent ?
Hello, first thing first, I was overwhelmed by how you tried to describe the world and it's system. I was confused and had to try to read it again. There aren't many grammatical errors but try not using repeated words. You have a great plot, but your world background and character design needs improvement.
I've read 91 chapters. Love the idea. Hate the execution and pace.The development is sooo ssllooowww, and the horrible update schedule just makes it worse. I don't expect him to be a god among men by now, but a system should provide more growth at a faster rate. After nearly 100 chapters, Jay still seems weak. When compared to other similar novels, the progress is much more tangible in every other novel I've seen. He has basically only used his system powers THREE times in 91 chapters! Also, the powers he does obtain with the system seem to grow at the normal rate of needing YEARS of honing.Then there is the issue of making small advances seem huge. Jay can now mildly sense what his parasites feel which gives him a low-powered danger warning sense and the ability to sense the strength of opponents. He can also slightly buff or very mildly influence someone infected with his parasites. He basically has 3 very normal protagonist skills. The author acts like these are insane gains in ability when they're really bland.In 91 chapters, he should have used his system multiple times, should have several skills, and should have tangible growth. The author may as well have left the system and parasites out at this rate, and just made the novel about a guy with 3 normal abilities instead of the usual one per person.
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when i saw the word upgrade specialist i remember there was a novel that has a upgrade specialist title too theres one chap that looks like in the orig idk but its kanda look alike chap search upgrade specialist in another world.
Since the author stopped posting this on Webnovel in contemplating doing it myself, I just want to know what people think if I were to do so?
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