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It has been a fun read so far, the author has created a unique world. Despite the fast pace, the character development was good, which made the story enjoyable to read. Way to go author, all the best.
Story has lot of potential , it's one of a kind novel,I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapter.ALL THE BEST?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like the story which started in a trope but diverge into something that became more enjoyable to read. There are a few mistakes but it's not noticeable enough to disturb your immersion. I just love this story a lot and I hope you continue writing author, best of good graces to you?
Wow! Reincarnation+Modern day. To be honest, this is my first time reading sports genre so I'm curious to see how the plot is going to work. Looking forward for the rest of the chapters??
interesting Book its nice sanbox themed read
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Amazing read. I've read the authors other book as well, so there is no problem in writing quality. only 15 chaps in and i am hooked!I like the mc, even though he is called a loser, he is actually not. even before he got his cheat, he is a genius. world background is modern setting. overall, it's a good book. give it a readddd
It was a nice read. The plot is very interesting. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer and sentences though. It can make readers want to leave the story.
Character design is vivid. I can already make out what Sanjay looked like and her attributes. Story wise although not much to say at the moment (3 chapters) do leave me wanting to know more.
Overall, this novel is decent but there are a few issues.First is, the author explains too much. There's too much explanation about some new building and how it works. Some are unnecessary and some can be said as it is. Second, the fact that the MC dealt with no issues with the citizens apart from the fact that they're too weak is unrealistic. People get jobs and suddenly, they're happy and no problems occurred afterwards. In every place, there are always problematic people. Drunkards for example. There were even no mention of thievery in Dry City, as if everyone just turned obedient conveniently for the MC. Even if every single one of them got jobs, some habits, while they can be dealt with, they don't die easily. Mass migration from people of different places should have introduced some problems but for some reason, they were obedient. Also, the fact that people from other places could successfully migrate to the Black Plain without leaving any traces is also quite unrealistic. If it's the soldiers, then there would be no issues but civilians are hard to control, especially when they weren't yours or when the cultures are different. There is also the lack of skepticism. Although the author tried to explain this part, the fact that the whole population of a city just disappears and migrates to the Black Plain is quite unrealistic. No one stayed behind, especially the old people, who are (not all) supposed to be the most stubborn and difficult to persuade. I'm still currently on chap 371 so the author might have already addressed these on the not so recent chapters but even if he still hasn't, I hope the author reads this for improvement. Overall, this novel is, as I said, decent and full of potential.
This novel have a fresh story within it, I guarantee you will not be bored to read it. Why? Didn't I tell you that the story from this novel is fresh? The story is different from other novels and very interesting, this might be a new wind for the novel world.