Please let me know if anyone is reading this book by ur reviews so that I know if to continue or delete it completely..... tell me what you think
The story is...ok, but it's also really rushed and the lack of proper grammar kind of hurts my brain a little bit, the character is kind of meh and so is the world, though mostly it's the messy writing that really annoys me, does the author not know how to properly punctuate? If English isn't your first language than I can understand that but if that's the case shouldn't you get a beta reader or something? Also, the story is really rushed, and the MC is kind of all over the place, I'll drop it for now but I'll check on it every once in a while to see if it gets better
WOW. Simply gnarly and terrorsome. I'd loveeee if i could see an action sequence or much more if you have a good plot in mind. I LOVE IT. Wtch the promised neverland, its about a farm for human children raised by women who tell the kids they're going to get adopted, but inturn end up meeting terrible fates because there are no parents. There are monsters that eat humans just like lifestock! This is a amazing plot, love the repetition, I'd loveeeee to know moree.
I cannot even get through chapter 2. It has some of the better grammer I’ve seen, but the writing is childrens book level. “See spot run. See spot eat out of the dog bowl. See spot go to Petco”
Till 100 chapters the novel felt good. Read till 300 chapters on raws, couldn't continue. It is just a waste MC with bull**** luck, forced comedy and ****ty plot story. I wouldn't recommend
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This is Just a Copy PasteIDk why the FK this get pass selection?............................................... .........................
Not your typical idol story, i like how character was set and the story progressing. Keep up the good work Author!??? (looking forward onto how his soul goes to mc)
Yes shameless 5 star review. Well this is first time i am writing novel and i would like to try my best. And i would be happy if you give me your power stone. Well i would not drop this novel anytime soon and will try my best to develop characters and have no loophole. Since this is douluo dalu i will try to make my mc 'balanced' but it is hard in fact he is already op. But not broken. And i will try to make chapters without making mistakes. Please tell me if you have found any. Well that is all
I will review if Author comes back because this FanFic is fire,absolutely beautiful except some little, tiny errors in words but that is it. It is beautifully done fast-pace,"spoiler" but I am waiting for his mana or divine body and ?Evolution? or similar word, read it and you will understand. I have not found other mistakes. AUTHOR, COME BACK, I WANT MOAARRR OF YOUR DRUGS!
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