The story is nice and All, but the pacing is sooo freaking slow, how can we take that long just to get out of the testing area? it's not even the Tutorial, that part is supposed to be weeding of the trash and early glimpse of what is to come, so a breeze for our regressor mc that once stood at the peak, even if it's a challenge with his current abilities it won't take too long to finish but no, we spend more than 70 chapter on this. it's just so painfully slow
It starts out a little slow but it picks up pretty fast and it is pretty interesting to read once you start reading it but when you do you do not want to put it down.
Love it till now so keep it up
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Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in!Things to expect from this story...1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head. 2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning. 3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood. 4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff.5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected.5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes!6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises.7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character.8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think.Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect ?
ii really like this series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i would definitely recommend, but that is just because i really enjoy gaming novels, but the story is nice, mc doesn’t feel op or something and there is already some character development. if you’re not sure if you want to read it just read a couple of chapter and decide if it’s worth it after :)
Give me the full name and birth date of the person that have picked this novel I'm going to curse him with a voodoo doll for a week for the immense waste of my life I have done reading 4 chapters of this novel
i dislike the writing style in the earlier chapters of the book and i dislike it for the sole reason it feels more like your reading someone roleplaying rather than a book with thoroughly explained concepts making you feel like your inside the book, due to the fact it's written like that i can't actually imagine or find the drive to continue reading i stopped early in the book for the way actions were described it'll probably be better later but i can't find the will to read anymore
Honestly mc is extremely one dimensional , he literally ate Zhang wuji cuz he wanted his luck and didn't like his plot that would happen further on which is insane , second he kills people for no reason cuz he be simping for girls and they just started talking about a girl he met for day and he decided to kill them which is mad
A great novel even though many seem to have issues with the ”mc getting dumber”.
I’d like to say that it truly gets better. Sure he has some questionable moments during chapter 70-80 approx, but it’s a great novel in the early chapters and the later ones.
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it's a good story so far i hope to see more. one question why is this not in the fanfic section when I search hxh.
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