Just read the first chapter... Giving my support to creators for the efforts and the kindness of sharing the work with us. It's not easy to please everyone so keep the hard work and shine on. Best wishes ??
I am loving this novel! The only reason I didn't give it five stars across the board is it hasn't been updated in 10 months, but from what I've seen, when the author was still writing this book Chapters were published at least daily. The characters are entertaining and likeable, the plot is very interesting, the scenes are well written, the quality is very good. Overall, it's a great book!
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I read the mtl version and found the fruit ability that comes from this emotion is very similar to one of the mc abilities in the novel "Castle of Black Iron". the idea of the story like the devil is also very similar.
Isn’t this book a Chinese Story with more than 500 chapters ? Are you even the author ? Or are you just using chat gpt to rephrase the chapters to earn money ???
Is a thrilling adventure but focuses more on the amenities the system provides such as food instead of action if you like reading about a man in the apocalypse driving around without problems or the need to procure anything for survival this is for you
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I stoped at chapter 8, i could have at chapter 6 because this novel IS RUBBISH..,.I WON'T WASTE MORE OF MY TIME, farewell ?????????
great ? ? beginning ..... hope remains same... unlike other choice novel... Plz ? don't make it boring.... thank you ?... will update the ratings... depending upon how ? the story goes.
The MC Should not start to kill police officers without any reason. The MC mistakenly killed someone and to escape from the police he started to kill. Dude this is not how it works. Change the plot. Either the MC should know that he is killing Felons or the MC and Police should both be a part of the escape program and the bullets are fake. An MC should not go on a pointless killing spree of Police Officers. A MC is like a light(maybe he shines in the light or hides in the darkness). An MC can never kill innocents. This goes against the rule of Protagonists. Or You can also change the crime of Mc and make it that he killed a corrupted high level official and when the police force tries to catch him he only kills the ones who have been corrupt or are up to no good(His system can help him identify the type of police officer the person following him is). This can allow the MC to stop killing innocents and also allow most of the plot to go unedited.
I am not really a fan of gaming books but the book was interesting. The character and plot were well developed. However, I feel that to help the reader understand the urgency of Dr Wu's experiment. The author should have given them a better insight into 'GOD' tyrannical rule. That way the reader would understand why Alexiel and Dr Wu were willing to risk their lives. instead of making it feel like they were doing so because the writer said so or because the plot needed them to do so.
Beautiful! splendidly beautiful! story has great progression with the necessary elements, a proper balance in character design and great dialogue. With proper update stability, all points scored! ??nice work author