Heyo folks, your dear author Roselia Black is here to rock the world again and writing a bestseller.If you're a fan of Dystopia, action, superpowers,BL, medieval fantasy, contemporary romance, please please please pretty please give my novel a look, even if you don't. read it anyway.A shoutout to the fan with the most comments!
This a good story. Good character, stable updates, good story development, and very good world design. I like where this story is going. Worth a try!
The idea was good enough but execution not so muchThings just happen without reason at all and come out of nowhere too many skips between storylines it feels like "We are doing this now, oops that's a lie, now we are doing that" it feels really weird to read, a lot of unfinished business.The grammar also doesn't help at allThe character interactions are weirdOverall it feels that things keep changing on a whim rather than planned
Hello, this is the author, Yun Yin! (Insert shameless self-promotion here...)I am a new writer on Webnovel, and this is my first time writing a cultivation novel, so please leave behind any comments/criticisms, they will be very helpful!Enjoy! :)(Not actually stable in updates but.... T_T)
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Well written, and the system is more complex and interesting than general system out there. HIGHLY RECOMMENDEDAlthough its less gore than another apocalypse/surviving theme, still enjoyable ^^band you get free aphrodisiac poison in your MC body HOHOHOHOHO
The story is interesting and I can see load of potential. However, the update is really lacking as it's taking forever for a chapter to be updated. I suggest author to try to write at least 1-2 chapters per week.
Author really went and accidentally made the mc too op so he nerfed him. This was at like chapter 5 as well. Got some cheat powers only to get taken away a second later because the author doesn't know how to write. Like if you gonna regret making the character too op then at least nerf him in a way that is acceptable. You take away his skills, the girls he coincidentally killed are some young masters, and worst of all he's not used to killing again even though he was literally torturing the girls earlier.
||you already have another novel with an mc borrowing power for the complete novel
I really like this novel. hello author? Hello author? HELLO AUTHOR? Where'd ya go? You said you'll upload at least once per month, no? I want to stab you so much because I'll have to look through other garbage to find a good novel to read again due to your lack of update. sighhh.