Nice work with great intelligence Keep it up
Overall: A solid 4*
But I can say one thing for sure: The MC is quite dumb. I am a logical person and find myself very often frustrated reading about how the MC is reacting or how she does certain things.
Another thing I find kind of annoying are the small but plenty written mistakes.
The best example is instead of "tried", the author is ALWAYS writing "tired". I think it could be auto correction from a third party software, but this just shows the Author is not even reading her/his own work after writing. Not even once.
It has a lot of slice of life, the description of the world is colourful, but the MC is doing a lot of things without any brain.
You will stumble upon a lot of plot armor therefore.
But: I just hope Author-san improves more and at least reads his own written work at least once for getting rid of all those small but sad grammar mistakes :)
The Mc is completely pathetic and the god who reincarnated him is annoying.
New novel haven’ seen anything like this yet I hope it gets picked like it a lot!!!!!!!!!
enjoying the story so far, good development of characters and story, not just dumping everything at the start, just disappointing its locked behind the app, continue to write good luck with the story
This novel has basically been stealing views by stealing and cropping the covers of popular novels and hoping readers get confused. Not cool.
I feel that this type of leveling system is really interesting. The subtle way that the author shows how the Mc living in a skill system world without too much distractment, it was only during the sleeping period that the system updates. Very interesting.
This… this is an absolute gem. I am in complete awe ? of how much story, character development, emotions, and plot is fitted so cohesively yet chaotically together that it sucks in all of my attention that I couldn’t stop reading and thoutoughly enjoying myself in just 17 chapters.It’s been too long since I’ve read a story that had me so invested into genuinely wanting a satisfying conclusion of a story. I want this story to do well and progress for as long as the author possibly can with the same quality he has presented us with.Thank you for writing.
Overall it's a pretty good one and i don't mind being slow paced,but the character is too weak and his growth is really slow to the point he can barely beat the weakest bunch,always needing protection from someone stronger,and characters who could end him easily just keeps on popping up in a place considered like a beginner zone.This is simply frustrating because you know the mc can't even protect himself not to mention his Selena because you know he doesn't have any trump card and is too weak to do anything to even the weaker canon fodders
I love that he is composing his own music instead of latching on to every hit he knows is about to come. Using his own talent makes this story possibly the best in this genre that I have read. There are a few obvious grammatical errors that can easily be fixed and it's a five-star superb story.
Anyone got any info about the raw for this novel? Chinese title? Chap count? ........................................................Thanks!
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