Its a good thing to be an eunuch in the first chapters, don't even think about getting women yet, I hate harems so this is kinda good
My esteemed author.. please post the next chapters
writing is good..sometimes name of character didnt't change...looks exactly copied story
It is basically in the same class as tasty trash food. If you are fine with wasting your time and all the clichés you are used to and the weird reasonings or events that feel like the author had an idea and simply was rushing towards it rather than building and shaping a real world or a story that unfolds to them, it is a decent read.
Its Good, But not as i expected, Author End it Early without letting us see the fight against extraterrestrial only he show how it descended, Even Not Complete Descend only saying Human We Descend Ended, Everything is good But not as you expected Like its summary its all fake, It End Fast And His territory id only span of a small valley and flatten mountain he didnt even let us see the late game only early stage, He keep saying late stage, when the extraterrestrial invaded his force is still weak, suck suck. World character updating translation all is fine but story is extremely disappointing.
It was a struggle to get to ch83 and I’m giving up. MC is dump and everything seems too complicated the cards are also very annoying. I still don’t know how everyone has a their own pocket world.
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Won’t lie, the start was a little rough to read (a little boring and slow), but after chapter 45 it really does start to pick up. If you can read through the first 45, you will start enjoying this read
MC has everything just fall into place without really needing to try at all. Not much story happening either. If you want mindless reading and you're not worried about how well the story is written then this is worth your time. Who knows the quality might pick up in the later chapters.
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Its alright for your first attempt. Keep it up for I liked it. Just don't drop it.Be stable. I think you lack the ability to explain an event pretty clearly and in a stable way. But I think you can improve it after some period. I think that you don't make grammatical mistakes and your writing is alright.
Really liked the 'Your Choice' thing going on, extremely unique if i do say so myself. Moreover, the choice of words is commendable and I really like how the story makes the reader feel as if they are in the world. Although only a few chapters have been uploaded, the quality and writing style is really good. Keep it up!