A good story to read .. it just that its a bit similar to RoTWRTW and Reincarnation of the strongest sword .. but all in all its good ? and has a diff touch to it .. i really like it ??
Helloooo!!Interesting and good novel to read. Mix original of gamer elements with cultivation world elements. I started reading this novel i really loved it. The characters are well characterized and realistic you can identify with them.
This story is underrated if anyone wants to read it then read it full you will love it for sure. Author Please start writing again it has been 5 months and no updates till yet. I put this novel in library still waiting for story to resume. I will support you Author any way possible.
I like this novel but it stretches too much in uninteresting parts. I think the novel will develop quite good but the info dumbs are seriously annoying :(Thanx for the work
Dear writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story, I hope you can continue the story I am waiting for the continuation of the story, I hope you can continue the story I am waiting for the continuation of the story, I hope you can continue the story
Author here!~This novel will be hentai intended so be careful, although its not every chapter but it would sometimes appear so KIDS begone from here!~I didn't give full 5 star since although I have confidence on my own writing, it wouldn't be same in other eyes (you! yeah you!).Its not like I'm genius in English, so I'm taking full minus star for this flaw as my motivation to improve though I doubt that no one will pick it since I'm sure cliche review will appear about it.
To say the truth i was thinking that novel is like the other ones with villains, but no, and that really surprised me, the history is simple but it's good.Ps: I know it's a cliche, but i want him with Alina too.
Good story line. The writer continually brought nature into his writing. There is still room for improvement on continuity. The plot is good and well detailed.
I really like your story and am eagerly waiting for your updates. Thx for the new chapter btw and keep up the good work. Love the book and you author. Fighting. ????❤️❤️❤️
The Writing Quality is nice, the world building was Ok. I'm just vexed on how the MC act. He is intelligent when it comes to magic and things regarding battles; however the MC lacks some common sense and vigilance. He don't know how to stay lowkey and he should collect more information before he act. He's lack of vigilance to his surroundings causes him inconveniences. Lastly, he should open more common skill gatcha, even if he can't level them up at the same time - at least he has a lot of skill in his arsenal that can be useful to him when some unforeseen accident arrives. He can also acquire some passive skill that can help him hide his mana fluctuation and can automatically sense if there is someone spying on him.
I really hope they revive this novel and it get chosen for real this is a great novel and they did in no justice leaving it hanging like this
Currently my best.... The translation is quite good... Ah like the storyline... MC is not always dumb and stupid... The characters are well made... No random killing off of characters!