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can't wait to read where the story is gonna lead to.
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Malachim is an interesting novel.First, I would advise giving it a chance until chapter 4, the novel really starts there. It's an interesting premise and well-executed, Malachims, possessions, the church, it's all kind of simple to understand, while all those things clearly have more depth to them.One thing I had a hard time with is remembering Alley wasn't a girl LOL. I'll get used to the name... eventually!So far the novel has been set up properly, and we encountered interesting characters, and there's some foreshadowing for things to come, so it should be interesting to red.The pace feels slow at times, but the faster-paced scenes make up for it.I recommend :)
This story honestly is a work of art .Character development is also top notch .Honestly im really hooked and can’t wait for the next update ❤️❤️
A book written during a period where things are dark and the world needs something full of light, races is surely the best. keep up the good work.
The storyline, the setting and everything is on point. It grabs the reader from the start and never lets you go. The depiction is so accurate that for a moment, i thought i was experiencing what the ML was. I love it so far. Kudos to you author
Writing Quality: 89% Perfect Story Development: 99.9% PerfectCharacter Design: 99% PerfectUpdating Stability: 89% perfectWorld Background: 99.9% PerfectI can't describe how much I felt hooked to this book. It reminds me of the Giant and horror movies that I used to watch. This book really felt like I was watching a movie. And I appreciate the author's effort and commitment towards writing this book. Even if he couldn't write in a day or two, it is worth your effort. The flow of the grammar makes the storylines more attractive to read.Hoping to see you get more popular with this book. (Annyeonghi gaseyo??)
Good novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This really an interesting read, with an encrypted message and I can read the message, it will reveal an apostate system driving apostasy as a norm with the church as the projected figure. This kind of writing is one in a million and I must read this, because it has something in common with my thought line, so from this read, I cannot decline...Kudos, to this amazing author...I love your writing style.
What else can I say, but this story is so scary. The second chapter was the scariest and I love it. I wish the author can write more of this. Good job, author ?
Well for a story plot, and world development this good. Have been reading a lot system stories lately, that I grew tired of it. Since am on vacation, I might as well read some Twilight. Thumbs up autho- san, am also adding this to my library.
it's a awesome book but what happened to the author? :(...............................................................................
