okay so I'm not always write a review but this book somehow makes me wanna write one, but not for a good reason. there's several reason that makes me write this1. the inconsistency for the sake of the plot: I read how this was the author first take on game element story but can author make it more consistent, for example the effects of multiplying of the CCed time that somehow not trigger and the author said it's gonna be explained in later chapter, I mean you can said that's a requirement to trigger it when you first give that passive don't need add a mystery like this is a game story that bound to have explanation of the skill unless like requirements of the exp since it's related to job then I'm okay with it but skill one? yeah, I mean there's some game that have hidden mechanic for the skill but not with passive skill since it's passive. 2. next one how a game that only around for 4 years can affect real life? yeah sure you can exchange currency but it's normal but making doctor exam with game knowledge? that's kinda absurd. Unless the game affect reality and its integrated then fine. but how can game knowledge save someone life? only this two reason is enough to make it annoying yeah the writing quality is good but the world building and the consistency? (idc about there's irl stuff and such because I enjoyed but the moment you incorporate it and ruined it that's the problem you must solve)
Giving it a five stars because this story seems to be pretty unique compare to most light novels nowadays. The cover is interesting and the synopsis is good. If I had to give it an honest review just based off of all of this, then I would give it 4.25/5 but Qidian doesn't work like that so 5 stars it is then.
Hey guys, I just realized the first review of my novel that I personally and shamelessly made was all in caps. Anyway, as you can see, this a new novel I am working on.
I started reading this novel despite the terrible grammar, but I could not read more than two chapters, because MC is incredibly stupid, seriously, even children have more logic and reason than this idiot, I do not recommend starting reading this novel for those who have at least minimal standards of "adequacy" of the protagonist.
Our Mc transmigrated into the body of a film producer in the 90's. Naturally he knows what movies will be a hit. That very first chapter caused me to dislike the MC, that being said the plot moves along fairly quickly. This just was not for me, but give it a try and see.
Based solely upon the first chapter and the synopsis, it sounds exceedingly similar to 'IRASS'. However, in execution, it is quite good. The writing style flows well and the paragraphs are correctly spaced. Though the quality of grammar is slightly sub par, the story and character development seem solid. Good job if this is your first novel!
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Waooooo***.........Bring justice into an unjust world..?This must be one of the besssstttttt boring novel right....?God novel, good ver good you must not read it....Hehhee
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.Alternative Names:• Laughing in the Wind• State of Divinity• The Peerless Gallant Errant• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu• 笑傲江湖Translators:• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)• HHaung (Chapter 21)• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)Editor:• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this
Have to ask a question to fellow readers. You big giant ass one eyed wolf with fur black as night. What you name him? Our girl look at him I know what your name boy fluffy. Yes she name one eyed demon wolf fluffy
One sided love is always painful Vanessa should just kill that love and find someone to love and treat her better
very interesting book really loving it