Honestly I really do enjoy this book. I’m currently on chapter 23 and the pacing is steady, allowing for development as well as seeing Luca (our Mac) show out when he can. The system doesn’t make him op like in most novels just allowing him to develop at a slightly quicker pace, Luca himself is a layered mc, needing to grow up young but still showing his age at moments. There are some writing mistakes here and there but all in all I’d recommend this book to whoever likes the sports genre.
Its all the same as the previous one the only difference here are the dogs from another universe the rest is all the same repeat and repeat until the end how boring part 1 is more better but this sequel is TRASH!.
Chapter order is all wrong, you have chapters in the wrong place, and even sentences out of order, in short this MTL is all over the place, save yourselves the headache, especially when the dickhead author expects you pay for it
Great story, great potential, Its dark which is good for a villain novel, I think we're gonna see more of Zero doing the worst to survive, again good for a villain story, its also a Cultivation novel, but I'll be honest the start is good, but it's still too early to judge if it'll stay like that, but I'm trusting it will, keep up the good work Authoralso I hope the Author makes a Auxiliary Chapter of the power system. GJHope it gets even darker??.
My father looked at me with a slanted smile and mumbled. "Hah, sucker child."
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Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
"Yeah go take a rest, dont push your self Fritz."
Then he saw the villagers shouting and running towards the cabin in panic. Even the captain of the ship was no exception.
Since my father died me and my mom faced my problems,as we were the richest family in our whole family and our business was progressing leaps and bounds. We deals in diamonds. As I was the only a child of my parents only a girl my uncle means dad's brother wanted to take over our company.
Ice Phoenix terkejut dengan kata-kata Vaun, alisnya berkerut dan menjawab dengan dingin: "Taruhan apa?"
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