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I really like it so far ch 5 I hope you update it more often it's good and has good potential hope to see more of it soon! ..................
Well first 19 chapters are not bad.But the mc too money oriented.With his ability it should only be his small goal.So first 19 chapters are ok but i'm not sure if the others be ok or not in the future and if i will be ok with mc personality....For now i will read more for sure.
Overall, this story is okay if you are just looking for a quick read, just make sure to turn off the logic processors in your brain, so that you don't fry your brain thinking about the author's thought process when writing this. The way that his luck affects HIS CHOICE OF VILLAGE is stupid, because if it's going to redirect him, why even give him a choice in the first place. Author might as well have just done the same thing as he did with the Class and made it auto select.
was interesting but then became obvious its harem trash. its like authors no people wont read a harem so they don't tag it as one. this is also a fake op mc, wasted another day on a bother trash novel. think I really should give up finding new novels
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-Translations are at most subpar.-The plot is borderline boring and repetitive that the stability of updates doesn't justify it. -No story development at all with all the repetitive cliches.-Character Design? The main character should have been a strong one based on his "dragon" bloodline and genius comprehensive abilities, but the author decided to make him a sidekick.-World Background? What's that? 150 chapters of how some background mob characters talk between each other without MC making a single appearance.Overall the whole novel is poorly thought of.
Each chapter is as long as twice or thrice of normal fantasy novels. Though I read 90 chapters only, it took me 2 days to do so and I think that much must be worth 200+ ch. Also the story and plot is awesome. I love OP and here it is OP. Moreover it's balanced as the mc also gets to suffer a lot but this is what makes it intriguing. The mc has potential to surpass the heaven itself as the heaven were fearful to even seal his talent. (That in itself shows the enormous potentials it has). The novel also has many twists and turns like how he got other bloodlines from System, how he got new physique in lucks and opportunities and there were events out of expectation, like the betrayal of his adoptive grandfather(to which there is reasonable story as well). Most importantly, The mc knows when to take heed of system and so it's not dependent on system. The MC's hardwork is more provident as you read the chapters and understands that Mc has the determination and understanding that only he himself can become stronger. I don't think that giving arts and techniques to others is bad since every mc has his friends, brothers or subordinates that they bring to the top in a cultivation level, moreover once you read you will realise the it's not that much OP techniques given to other, compared to what our Mc itself have. With the best world building you could ever have, I already have the general view of the Martial world, also called outer realm, only by reading the 90 chapters. The universe is the world they live in and there are outer realms where mc is born, also dragon realm, heavenly realm, and wonderful plot along with that hidden in a story where the heavenly realm is the plotter villian of his parents and him.There is also that Nine heavens and ten Earth mentioned by a random war spirit which could possible be past life mystery.Updating stability is awesome, It only took me two days to finish the novels but author released 4 chapters in that time, leading from the growth of ch90 to 94..Also the author is talkative and answer your queries, he is tolerating the cricitism and answering to that! He is the best author you could get..Moreover as you slowly read, you will realise the awesomeness of growth type novels as the MC's personality slowly changes..As for writting quality? You could hardly get spelling or grammatical mistakes, equal to impossible.Hmm I'll only say this, for me this novel belongs to the best of the novels in my heart.You might feel dissapointed with the turns of events and sometimes unreasonable but what you don't know is that, there is no unreasonable acts in the novel! and if you continue reading, everything will be slowly revealed, just like a wonderful art of revealing.
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Website : qidian china Views : 1.48 million Rating : 7.8(122) Chapters : 1182Status : completed Word count : 2.60 million author rank : lv5
Author is racist prick where chinese are supreme and other races are inferior. Every fucking time enemy is Japanese. Freaking corrupted chinese government!
New novel from the author of Ancient Godly Monarch (AGM), that is already translated here. Rating seems 9,4 on QI so i'm looking forward to read his new book.