Honestly, the story is good. Though there are 7 chapters so far, the author dives really deep into the main character and tries to make him relatable. The writing quality is fairly good with a few structural mistakes here and there. (rather than structural mistakes it's more like the author could've used a better choice of words) still, I shall give him 5 stars. Also because the story is relatively short (7 chaps) I am willing to believe in the author and give him 5 stars. It's looking promising so far, and because of the small amounts of chap, I can't really give it anything less than 5 as character dev, world-building doesn't just get built in a few chapters. The only thing that prevents me from giving this a full 5 stars is the stability of updates which is like once a week. I can only give it 4 stars as of now. Keep up the good work
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I'm a bit stupid becoz I read the book, ranted to my friends about how good it is, but forgot to review it. *facepalm* Well u got it, this book is the perfect escape from all the usual sappy stuff u see in WN. Well not that I mind it, becoz I even read it but U know wat I mean. Thank u author-sama for writing this fanfic.
?% garbage ?️?️?️ annoying , SIMP, guided by the nose, this is the MC of this novel.and this what i know of til i drop it.and the Author .... SIGH.
This story starts slow, but getting better with each chapter. The main character is good, and the background characters isn't forgotten. Everyone has their own role in a special way. Worldbuilding is solid and the story flow is smooth. This story slowly unravel mysteries behind every character as it progressed forward.Conclusion : This a good read. The 1st story that includes almost every tags you can think of (supernatural, sci-fi, slice of life, action, adventure,comedy, tragedy, etc.) and the author still did a good job writing it. This story reminds me of Gintama.Rating : 10/10
I really like the story. it's super good. although I find the system and the characters a bit annoying, I guess that's part of the plot. anyways, it starts with the preview. It's much longer than normal, and instead of one chapter it keeps going for six. the mc describes some petty drama she had to solve between rotten spoiled noble classmates that I couldn't care less for, which she has to involve herself since she's the responsible class representative. the system which is their teacher puts her on detention for trying to put out the fight instead of doing nothing, and one side character in detention goes knifey knifey, which sucks.she essentially got killed for the teacher and his class, and now while they get to live peaceful lives as doted on children, she has to fight tooth and nails as a snake to survive and evolve.... because of a joke from the goddess. now... that's not bad, but what makes it worse is how the teacher constantly ridicules her choices... badmouths the mc, and he said something like "I don't think you're worthy of the goddess's gift" for eating too much poison to get poison resistance on a quest he gave, which makes him into a total bitch in my book. luckily the mc doesn't really takes this seriously, and she gets to live her life without feeling sorry for herself.now. asides from that... the mc is solid. one reason I like female mcs is 'cause they tend to not go murderhobo, which is super good imo. the mc doesn't mercilessly kills everyone to prevent having enemies... while making more enemies. instead she's smart. instead of killing she tries to use them. she finds herself with a bunch of hungry siblings that would devour each other if worse comes to worse? she doesn't eat and kill them. why not train them? she finds herself in a prison with a bunch of beasts that could become mindless drones... she doesn't eat them. why not use them to create a diversion? the mc is a good mc.
There’s typo rarely, but development is really fast and this is very good thing, because story need to be fast(first 50 chapters are the most important, if you want to have fan base, of course),sometimes drama and many plots, dynamic fights, more powerfull realms, more heh, you know.I giving 100% of stars, just for you.Good luck, Author.
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I'm truly impressed by the plot development and narration of this story, It is well-crafted and captivating. The contrast between Reigan and Celine is really strong and I do want to read more!
I highly recommend novel, its well written. All of my expectations are met.At first I got curious what the f*** is the title of this novel then plan to read some small chapter to answer my doubts and questions, but now I feel ashamed of judging this novel by its title only. For the author, I am now a big fan or yours please post more chapters faster pretty pleasee. Haha i love this novel
amazing bro. .it's good you should try to publish it more you know.... . . ... . .. . .... .... .. ..... . ........ . .. ....... m. . .... ...
Certainly a peice of trash however Begs to differ what sort of emotional conditioning and circumstances led to this result?