So this story is very cool the premise is cool and the writing is good hence the score. But to balance that i'm going to tell you the only thing wrong with the story in my opinion. Everytime the author introduces anything or anyone in this world they give a 2 to 4 paragraph highschool essay about who that person is or what that object is the history of it ect.. I know your thinking thats not bad as it gives more background to the story but it's not always fictional things. Its real life things or real people that actually exist. Things that if we cared we could look up or things that we might already know. So this make the story needlessly long winded. like it's being padded for chapters just to make the story longer. everything else about the story is cool and very interesting but these unneeded long winded explanations slow the pace of the story so right after you get excited about something the MC is doing or is going to do. You get hit with a long explanation of how big a story The Hobbit is..... Like we don't know the hobbit is an amazing book that set up one of the greatest trilogies of books in history. This makes parts of the fanfic feel tedious and ruins fun or exciting parts of the fanfiction that could otherwise be enjoyed.
Well written ,but i found the tittle little unappropriate ,though he's a Scientist back then in his past life he doesn't manage to show he's knowledge , What i mean is He only depends on the system
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It’s is a nice story for a change. A survival apocalypse with system, along with a smart and ruthless MC, whose personality has been forged over the course of 7 years of the future past. Time travel is confusing.
awesome book .I hope author won't leave it mid way and finish the book because it is always painful to see a good story not reaching an end. thank you
10/10
An obligatory, shameless highfive from author to himself!Hello guys, here is some bits about the story in general:This novel treats about a guy from a modern times transported (not this time, truck-kun!) to the past times, only to learn that the game he wanted to play, turned kinda into reality! With system to his side to aid him on his adventures, he will aim - like the title says - for the crown, but not of the state that was bound to soon start falling apart, but a powerfull and modern country that he would create himself!As for more technical side of things, this story will get at least 2 daily chapters, unless something IRL happens. Additionally, I do acknowledge that I'm not fully content with the early chapters as they are too infu-dumpy without a real hook, so as soon as I will find some time to do so, you can expect me to rewrite and improve that part!
Great book! At first while reading a prologue I was confused if it was a boy or a girl pov but by the end I got the gesture...another devil story and a great one at that..author has narrated the story exceptionally well.. Everyone should give it a chance to read this book.☺️☺️☺️Good work keep it up!
I really love it . The Princess and political marriage between countries. I love to see there . planning to go save the Princess. They must Love there interested in the upcoming events. I hope she is worth to save her.tbey don't have a problem solving.
There’s definitely potential. I love the concept and can’t wait for more. But there are definitely plot holes and grammatical errors. But overall it’s great.
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Chapter 950's title, Blossoms and Blood Reappear, is actually a pun in Chinese. The Chinese title is “再见繁花血景”. “繁花血景” means "Blossoms and Blood