it's too much bland in the sense characters,story,world background and the stage is almost always wrong which makes more confusing than it was already.Even if it was cliche i wouldn't have mind but it's like written in the form of summary of cliches story.And the mc doesn't even feel interesting, you can literally go at him for the kill but he won't kill only break your sword.. And also the cringe justice talk which makes no sense.
The translation is bad, but not illegible, but the way its written makes reading this so tedious. I generally despise the genre gamelit, systems, but give the fact that this was based on dnd I was keen to give it a try. Poor judgement on my part.I'm on chapter 126 and reading this is as engaging and entertaining as passing a kidney stone with the size and shape of a spike marble.
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The plot is very very grippy and I enjoyed most of it. I would also advise you to run a grammar check before publishing it and that would just add to the look of it. I love how you designed your world and the detail in some aspects is almost like it's in front of us. Overall, solid job! ??
great novel really can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!! .
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