Please write this kind of novel more.there are lots of wuxia novel but no realistic novel.i will support you with my best effort.love the novel?????????
I was enticed with the title of him having max stats but what I read was so disappointing. I assumed that having max stats should have made him like a sort of calamity class type danger or something but this? He beats up gangsters and Awakeners that with having a max stat should have taken him just an instant to finish but no, its like the max stats doesnt mean anything at all. Having max stat would have meant that in one step you could cause earthquakes and stuff but this? Very disappointing. Not to mention the MC wasting his time on Gangster squabbles. A real veteran from so many wars would not have wasted his time doing this.
Lots of grammar, spelling and syntax errors. story is plodding along dozens of chapters in. decent idea, not the best execution. character is your standard "ends vs means" MC, nothing amazing or unique about him. updates regularly, which is good. and the detail added about the world in the novel is wonderful. but the 2D character designs detract from it, and the poor writing quality prevents immersion.
Ok I just have to say, I read till like the 14th chapter and then it became kinda wierd. So instead of just dropping, I skipped to chapter 43 and from then on the book becomes fu*king good and that alone is enough to grant this book 5 stars so, thank you auther <3333:)
(This isn't harem for those of you who are wondering)The MC transmigrated into the body of a disappointing royal prince and has to pay for the crimes that the original body did, the MC's monologues about how much of a pain it is to deal with this. I like how he curses the goddess for reincarnating him in the body of such a horrible person. The fights were also decently written. I also remember the world building being pretty great, it's nothing special but it is better than most novels. I am personally glad that the translation of this is actually pretty good. I suggest you guys vote for this as the novel is short(202 chapters) and is a pretty decent read throughout.
Dont lose faith author, if you have an objective you want your main character to accomplish then the step-by-step process to accomplish that objective can be written down and used for inspiration, the readers need to know what motivates the main character and you can add a little fun by writing fillers ? If you dont have a lot of imagination then why write in the first place?
The story is all right, and has some potential.Since it’s an intergalactic story, the world has a lot of room for development, and the “space cultivation” genre is always kind of interesting. That said, I don’t think the story is that well written, the characters have a bit of humor but that’s it. The conversations feel slightly awkward to read, and the plot is generally kinda mediocre. Since there are other better novels out there, I’ll put of reading the rest of the story for now and try to come back to it later on if it gets chosen and accumulates more chapters.
idk about the rest of the story but as of right now i can see one painfully obvious pattern. that is if he ever goes to a restaurant for some reason he will meet either some person that asks him to get out because they want that seat or insulted someone he knew, they will underestimate him and ****. And when he beats them up, they try to rely on their family and **** ensues. all in all the story is filled with plot amour and cliches but is good if you just wanna read something because you are bored
Dee's mother must be in on this because no one's mother would let anyone mistreat their daughter like this, especially with her being pregnant with her grandchild!
This chapter is a masterclass in pacing because it does three completely different things and never lets up. It starts with a discovery—Feng Wan finds a ledger, shows it to Grandma Liu, and the old woman's reaction is immediate: her face darkens, her steps are unsteady, she leaves without explanation. That's a hook. Then it pivots to warmth—the Wang couple visiting, the money exchange, the goodbyes with Grandma Liu. It slows down just enough to let us breathe. And then—bam—Shen Baoguo and Wang Xiulan are taken into custody. The police show up, they're escorted to the station, the logistics director's family is arrested. All in a few paragraphs. The chapter doesn't linger on the arrest because it doesn't need to. The consequence was always coming, and the speed of it makes it feel inevitable rather than rushed. Then it pivots again to preparation—the shopping, the money withdrawals, the stockpiling before winter. This is where the pacing gets really interesting because Feng Wan is moving with such purpose now. She's not discovering anything new, she's executing a plan. The two hours darting around the southern part of the city, emptying the Shen family savings, pretending to help an old lady to buy time—these scenes have a different rhythm than the discovery at the beginning. They're methodical, almost clinical. And the chapter ends not with a cliffhanger but with a quiet moment: the two sisters returning home together after buying headscarves and cream. No drama, just the calm before they leave for the countryside. The structure mirrors Feng Wan's emotional arc—shock, warmth, justice, preparation, resolve.
Very good book. Chapter 36 was blank but you were able to still follow along with the story.
this is beautiful book