Asarr
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The only thing I noticed is the whole shoving three different dialogue into one paragragh. You always start a new paragraph when starting a new dialogue.
The plot had potential, but it was written pretty badly. They don't elaborate at all, and it skips around a lot. I got confused a lot. Characters were brought into the story randomly, so they had no background. The world background was confusing as well, because it started with the zombie apocalypse, but after a while, she was a demon and there were no zombies.
the book is amazing the death of the 'cricketer friend' was really depressing though
When Qidian’s greedy for money yet always picks trash novels over good ones and MTLs them. What are they thinking. Do they even have a brain?
I read this novel back when it was still unlocked and stuff so I don’t remember much but it was pretty good, but is the author on a hiatus from the novel or did he drop it?
Overall a nice read. It has some spelling errors, but it's not so bad that it bothers you much while reading. The story develops at a nice pace and the characters are decently established. I'd say there could be improvements for the most parts, but it's already at a good point and I think you should give it a try. I enjoyed the story so far.
Hey guys, I'm the author for this novel. As I am new to this, please give feedback as much as possible. I would like to thank you in advance for all the help that I may or may not get, depending on how this series goes. See you guys in the novel then, I guess.
give it a try it's different from most of the average novel out there and it's good ( ch.83 )
Hello, I was wondering if this was officially dropped. So far I love the story and want to know if Autor is still alive and can continue this great work of his.
Just the shameless act of rating your own work, you know.
