a bad MTL after the second volume, the first was ok but the second there are he/she changes, repeat on words and error in formatting
This story is terrible. The main character spends the first 100 chapters doing nothing but letting other people beat him and throw him around so that he can be ‘low-key’ which actually just means he’s a coward who only deals with problems after they’ve already occurred.All the characters are stolen expies from other works, and so is most of the worldbuilding. In general, it’s just trash.
The story and background is good but here the main problem: Mc is an adult in previous life, now as a child and even as a zombie, I see no difference in his inteligence! his IQ is at the bottom and he started to call the girl or necromancer 'master' for god no why. Even acts like a child and things and most importantly he gets severely abused after becoming a zombie and he never even fight back. Since he doesn't feel pain, why not just become a lazy zombie Even when you get abused as he will not feel any pain... Even if he is killed, at least he will not have to live a life like a slave having worse life then being alive.I dropped reading it after the awakening ark. it's just... just boring? I read it to know a little about plot as my collection were completed and I came accross it. it's just too horrible.
MAPS BROTHER MAPS. Put a few maps in the description. We need maps in kingdom building novels. Even though it is the civil enengineer in me speaking.
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Writing is well paced and neat, which I appreciate very much as it makes it easy to the eye. I believe the story hasn't delved into its core yet and will be waiting for the upcoming chapters. The world is fascinating, however it would be even better if you described it in more detail. But one thing I want to say is do write at your own pace as you seem to be juggling two novels, and that is a very brave thing to do, if I say so myself XD Keep it up but don't forget to take breaks once a while!
I Made Perfect Accidents with a Pen After I was Released from Prison is the very same story as I Can Create Perfect Accidents. which is already in voters pool just with a different name
Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right?I hope you guys like this novel, it's my second time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws.Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing.I hope you all have a wonderful day!
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Props to this story for making me laugh! The humor is well-written, and I really enjoyed that aspect of this story. It's well-written, with little grammar issues that stood out to me (punctuation, periods missing). It has a unique charm to it that other's in its genre does not have. Worth your time to check it out!
Amazing book I became hooked b4 the 5th chapter amazing story development and creative characters
Maybe I'm biased or something but this book is the best for me. I'm not so much into novels but I just happened to bump into this one. I hope this writer gets the recognition that she deserves keep it up.