Emmanuel18
Overgeared, dimensional descent, shadow slave, hero of darkness
Indeed
Is it good? I plan to read a few chapters
These one are pretty underated Complete Korean Novels :
Master Hunter K., First Hunter, Sovereign of Judgment, A Monster Who Levels Up, Dungeon Hunter (Rushed Ending, but still good).
Valhalla Saga, +Novels by 'Toy Car'
others popular one? it's easy to search those.
I read the first two chapters, and I can tell exactly that the author didn't know how to write a novel. He failed to set the tone of the story, failed to introduce the main character, failed to establish the plot, failed to lay the foundation for world-building. The first chapter, which should have been the most captivating, was wasted on setting up a conspiracy involving characters I don't know and don't care about, as the author never gave me a chance to know or bond with them.
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At first, I thought it was just a short prologue. I expected the author to circle back and set up the plot after it ended. However, that wasn't the case, he simply ignored all of it. After reached chapter 19 without a single hint of plot, I decided to drop it.
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Sometimes it's just so obvious that the author doesn't know how to write. He may or may not have a good story in his head, but without writing skill, it's all useless.
Thnx.
Just smack that su to dead ... Motherfucker, disrespect to the mc
Kinda different, good to see a new ranking system, names are interesting too.
I don't quite understand everything yet but I like the way the story moves from a place to another instead of POV.
Interesting story,
any updates?
Good job author, please keep going
The plot and development is very good, but the writing quality can be better, use a stronger verbs and cut the less redundant information. Also, id recomment splitting the paragraph into a smaller substance will make it easier to read. Last but not least, make the transition more concise and smoother transitions between the setting...... a Very good read tho. Id like to check your other works.
really good more please not a lot of warhammer 40k on this app :(
It's alright, not romantic nor comedy tough. It's mostly angsty drama, insta Mangekyou unlock and stuff like it. Not my cup of tea but if you're into that sort of thing, it should be an alright read.Tags from what I've read:ReincarnationDramaAngstUchihaNaraNarutoNinjaMangekyou SharinganKonohaRoot
