Damaker
"No," I said immediately. "Nothing could be worse than things I already do remember." I stared straight at Julian. For some reason, I felt like this was a test. It seemed too pointed and specific a question for Julian to ask it without giving it a lot of thought beforehand.
Kibo powered up to his Mastered Super Human State, "This is Super Human Stage 1."
Doing this, he noticed many things. He had a great amount of friends but they did not all share the same importance to him. Some, he understood, he cared more about than others. He carefully classified them all in his head, from those he barely considered friends all the way up to those that came close to what he felt for Marcy.
Yi Long then scanned their bodies; 'This... Their bodies are top class, they have the bodies of an athlete... They are very well trained...'
'What the fuck, this two monsters!! They are so strong yet so young... This power is incredible...'
I hope you guys will try to understand my predicament and accept me my story .
after this novel is called duike~~~
Will the romance/harem be anything like your other novel?
After knocking on the door and turned the knob, she looked at the man in front of her and absolutely shocked.
MC is controlled by his girls as he is submissive type. Truly disappointed.Hope atleast his system will be his ultimate secret.Great plot. Skilled author.Anyway story is very good, MC should be the one in control of everything including girls with backbone, else how is he even going to tame gods when he can't even tame his master?.Thanks for this masterpiece.I will update my review later
This book is ONLY a decent beginning of a book. It lays out an interesting fantasy setting and stretches the intro plot on forever. It gives readers the feeling it will become something good, but it never does. If the plot developed, it might be a good novel - That’s a major reason for its success. But as it stands, it’s the nutritionally empty junk food of webnovels. Below is a list of other rambly criticisms:1. The writing is monotone. This is especially noticeable with characters who share speech mannerisms to an alarming degree. It is acceptable at first when everything is new and local, but as international cultures are introduced its nature as a flaw comes to light.2. Character worldviews and attitudes are generic. All characters (even leaders, foreign countries, and “gods”) fall into two sets, “generic beast companion” and “generic humanoid.” These sets govern nearly all tones, mannerisms, attitudes, and thoughts.3. Hundreds of chapters in its still 100% training arc. No real antagonists. Even “wars” against “faceless” giant monsters reads like a training arc.4. The book is padded out to be a “slice of life.” It sacrifices progress (aside from strength increases) for semi-repetitive good-vibe moments. If you buy into the inside joke-like style these scenes might give you a little dopamine rush. Otherwise, it’s incredibly stale and predictable made worse by the monotone voice everyone has.5. Other than the initial sudden twists (like a trial jumping out of nowhere), it’s too predictable.6. Although the world’s mystery was intriguing for a long time, what is revealed over time is less interesting than I had hoped. (This is a common issue with many books where the initial concept the author adopted was obscured by a more interesting concept that never gets fully realized)I’ve rambled enough. I read this a while ago and only reviewed it now because it's been pinned to the top of my library for two days and I’m tired of it.Should you read this book? Maybe. I did once and I don’t anymore. Keep in mind that it’s super junk food and in the end, you will probably be unfulfilled. If you’re fine with that, enjoy the sickly sweet flavor stretching on forever.
Shhhhh? Just let this review happen. It's not shamelessness...maybe? Follow your favorite cannibal as he travels the world. There will be romance, there will be action, there will be booty, but most of all there will be a feast...if you catch my drift. ?
